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Hi Folks,
Recently, I solicited your opinion on which version of the first page of "Miss Doomsday" I should use. Above is a new version of the page. Here is the previous version: [link]

I've shown a part of the newest version previously and would like to know which you prefer. This new version or the previous one. Any comment would be deeply appreciated.

Personally, I prefer the previous one (I love that mad stare and her sexy pose in the bottom panel) but I'd love to know your input.

This will the last version of the page. No more after this one.

Next page: [link]

UPDATE (3/17/2011)::
The bottom panel of the page was redrawn. I want to thank everybody for the invaluable comments here: [link]

I found arguments for either version to be extremely credible. I think both versions have their own strengths and weaknesses, so, ultimately, I had to pick one. I could have redrawn it or melded the two versions via Photoshop, but I need to move forward. So, I chose the newest version. It was a hard choice, because both sides made such compelling comments.

Again, thank you so much for all the comments. I hope you have a great week.
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skin2279Hobbyist Digital Artist
Art is not a democracy.
Tadpole7's avatar
Strong emotive content.
TGQueen's avatar
Why this is really dark, not that's it bad, it's not. It's just evoking sudden emotions in me I didn't know I was about to feel when clicking the thumbnail
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
It's a fairly dark story. I appreciate you checking it out, though.
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trivialtalesProfessional General Artist
Nice hook right off the bat, and great art to boot. I hope I remember to come back and read this.
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I'm working on more pages. :)
blackclouds1's avatar
i just saw this page for the first time. i like it!!
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! :)
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RobKing21Professional Digital Artist
So frikkin' great. I realize I'm way late on this, but the last panel in this newer version; the expression on her face is far more impacting to me.

I can't remember if I read it anywhere, but do you write these as well?
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Thanks, RobKing. I write and draw this story as well. In fact, it's often competing with the time I should spend on Opey. :)
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RobKing21Professional Digital Artist
Ssss, ooo, yeah. I really would love to see more Opey, but this story seems like it's going somewhere interesting as well. Damn you and your interesting dialog and characters, damn you to hell!
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I just want to say that I love the third panel, her expression is great and I love her messy hair and how her neck isn't cut off by the border.
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much. That one's my favorite on the page as well. :)
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this reminds me of a movie thiers some sort of gas that causes people to kill them selfs mainly by a cop who just shot himself in the heads gun
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Whoa. That has got to be one interesting movie.
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only problem was thier was a power cut when it just stared thats all I can acctualy remember that wasnt a load of talking :(
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Oh, man, I hate it when they make horror movies with too much irrelevant chatting.
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i know by the way have you got a 360?
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BLACKEYEDBOYProfessional Traditional Artist
great stuff.
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Thank you! This comic is a real labor of love for me. :)
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BLACKEYEDBOYProfessional Traditional Artist
You can really tell. Your passion for perfection is inspiring.
LukeMill's avatar
I like this page a lot more.
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cluedogProfessional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I prefer it myself. :)
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ArtistKev14Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This looks pretty sweet. I've seen the previous one. Both are great but with this version you can feel the sorrow of the main character. In the last one she seems to express more anger than sorrow. I think this one has more emotion but as I said both are great. Hey keep up the great work. = )
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