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Cleverun

I don't "ship." I approve.
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Comic artist, Steven universe fan, hopefully future animator. Currently unemployed; commissions are open.
Artist for the Steven Universe fan comic, Everyone Makes Mistakes.

Favourite Visual Artist
Rebecca Sugar
Favourite Movies
Spirited Away, Interstella 5555
Favourite TV Shows
Steven Universe, Star Vs, Miraculous Ladybug, Ben 10, Adventure Time
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Daft Punk, Gorillaz, TheFatRat, Goldfish, Panic! at the Disco
Favourite Books
Artemis Fowl, Song of Solomon, The Color Purple, The Inheritance Series, The Name of This Book is Secret
Favourite Writers
Eoin Cofler, Toni Morrison
Favourite Games
Bully, Stardew Valley, Don't Starve, Sims 3
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC, Wii
Tools of the Trade
Photoshop, pencil

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This picture is drop-dead gorgeous. The colors are bright and radiant, and it gives a feeling of hope to the viewer. The symbols put into this one piece is remarkable: God's promise and the bird of hope. Noah's smile is warm and welcoming, and it gives hope for humanity.

"Hope" is really the only word to describe this. The the peaking mountains, the ark, the colors, it's all wonderfully welcoming. It really gives the viewer a sense of God's forgiveness.

The composition of the piece is excellent. The direction that the ark faces leads the viewer's eyes to God's message, the rainbow, and the receding floodwaters. Noah is clearly visible, and is guiding the bird to fly off in the same direction, further directing the viewer's eye.

I suppose my biggest problem with this would be the rainbow; the colors are too thick and solid to look like a real rainbow. The perspective of the ark near the bottom is off. But this truly is an astounding piece. Well done.
Noah
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Some of the anatomy and perspective, such as the seafloor and Moses's left hand, hasn't been fully developed before it was painted; it's off. The colors are sort of dull, so it doesn't capture the eye in a way that it could have. It seems as though you were attempting to give a sort of sad feel to this piece, but I'm not sure how that would make sense. The way I understand it, this should give a feeling of hope or awe. Moses uses his god given powers to part an entire sea so he can lead his people to freedom. This should call for a bright sky, or something similar. Also, he hills ahead of the split sea look foreboding. I suppose it's scary to leave the only life you've ever known behind and enter the unknown, but I'm not sure that's the best message to give on this story.
Besides this, the detail is exquisite and beautiful. While some wrinkles are off, his sleeves are wonderful to look at. And the centerpiece of this painting, I believe, has to be the ocean. The tones and details used in it make me want to stare at it all day.
Overall, great work. You could use more improvement when it comes anatomy and perspective, though. Sometimes it's best to step back from the small details, maybe do something else for a while, then come back and examine it as a whole. This has happened to me before, and doing this helps a lot. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
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