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Dragon Ball Multiversal Page 1 Chapter 2 by ClearlyAnArtist Dragon Ball Multiversal Page 1 Chapter 2 by ClearlyAnArtist
A long awaited half life 3- OOPS, I meant the second chapter of my web comic.
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FeckButtPlug Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
This Comic isn't that bad my main issue is it looks a bit disproportionate at times the background doesn't mix well with the atmosphere and i don't really FEEL the impact these fights portray  i understand your using a device in which you aren't very good with but just a little critique ;)
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ClearlyAnArtist Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mouse is hard as hell. Also I didn't draw for a long time so I'll need to get a hang of things. Check out my first chapter. It's really hard to get the proportions, no matter what the hell I do , still wrong, so don't expect much of me, I have no talent and I am pretty much shit, but I guess I'll still do it because It's fun I guess.
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OsteoperosisVictim Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
I agree, FeckButtPlug. You certainly have a few points to stick in there.
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OsteoperosisVictim Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
Hey, I'm a new reader. My biggest question is.. Who are these characters? I haven't seen anything about them... Only fights..? Are we going to get any backstory? Have we already gotten backstory and I've missed it? If so, please link me to it. Other than that, nice drawings for someone using a computer (my guess is also a mouse). 
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OsteoperosisVictim Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016
Also, how come at one point he was mumbling about not being able to control it, and then suddenly he can? And why is he able to combine his base form with an ascended form? 
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ClearlyAnArtist Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You got it wrong. Give me where he was mumbling that he wasn't able to control it.
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ClearlyAnArtist Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
God dammit... There is a LOT you've missed, because this is a fan continuation of the dragon ball series that has all the explanation there. Now i don't know how to introduce it to the new guys.
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