This. Is. WONDERFUL.
the way you wrote this makes me feel indignant and in suspense- "here's the second before impact", my breath got caught in my throat as i read this!

my favorite line, "here's a corpse made of cake and icing" was so vivid, and it's wonderful imagery.

there's really no negatives for me to offer. i'm no good at dissecting symbolism this late at night- but just so you know, even just by reading it a couple of times, it strikes me as an unbelievablly intricate piece! (:

on another note, a lot of people shy away from using cuss words in their poetry- but i'm not going to lie. the perfectly appropriate way that you incorporated the sometimes-taboo into your work was actually the hook that drew me in and made me sure that i wanted to read it. it was bold, and it is brilliant.

also, when i give you five/five in all categories--- i'm doing it wholeheartedly. this is going in my poetry hall of fame. hahah

sorry if my critique is less than satisfactory.. it's been a long week. D: keep writing, your work is truly amazing!