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My back against the tree,

as I sit here and watch,

the Honey

and the Bee.
I think this is the shortest I've ever wrote. :)
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:icongameuniverso:
GameUniverso Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, a bee. I can't get that excited.
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:iconkraola:
kraola Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
So many bee ideas went through my mind when I saw this. Thank you, you have destroyed my art block. :meditation:
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:icondragonwing101:
Dragonwing101 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
Yum....
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Black-Feather1991 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Yummy ! <3
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Minicheddarsx Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the picture its really cool :)
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:icondiamondrwolf:
DiamondRWolf Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
mmm..nice:)
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Alignn Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
What the heck is that tool for anyway? I see it a lot in commercials but have no clue what it does.
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:iconcrayonsr4eatin:
CrayonsR4eatin Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
I always though it was a wooden microphone :iconidkplz:
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BANGDK Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Auuw, this is so cute :love: Did you also take the photo yourself? :)
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:iconhippyjonny:
HippyJonny Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
SMOSH comic book drawing in full color [link]
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:iconmummychunks:
MummyChunks Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
wow I love the pink with the yellow!!!
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jwscorpio Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Not much to it, sorry if harsh but i don't like it
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ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You know, if you don't like it don't read it. So please refrain from hateful comments on here, alright?
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ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Eh, it's alright.
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IILilithII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Beautiful~!
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:iconits-ash-yo:
its-ash-yo Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
so simple but so beautiful and cheerful. :)
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:iconclandestinebatheart1:
ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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lhs1014 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
*sniff sniff* beautiful... *sniff sniff*
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:iconclandestinebatheart1:
ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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NumberOneOwlCityFan Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
owl city<3
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nightworldcutie34 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
how can u post literature
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:iconclandestinebatheart1:
ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
What do you mean?
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:iconnightworldcutie34:
nightworldcutie34 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
4get it
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:iconkatmcmuffin:
KatMcMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
i love it!
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:icondragonfire333:
dragonfire333 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thats awesome;)
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PyroBlaze Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
Is the Image yours as well?
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:iconclandestinebatheart1:
ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, found it online.
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:iconpyroblaze:
PyroBlaze Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
Ah.. Okay then =/
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suitecake Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
Why is Honey and Bee capitalized? How does one watch honey? Why the comma at the end of the second line?

The power of minimalist poetry is in its ability to evoke strong images or themes or concepts. This piece does not accomplish that. The theme here is simple and standard; it is immediately visualized and there are no secrets lurking in the outer edges.
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ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh and you can also watch bits of honey drip from the comb. :) Just saying.
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:iconclandestinebatheart1:
ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's based off a owl city song, and the comma? That's just my method of writing this short stuff.
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tarikitti Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Owl City ftw. He's so inspiring- hence your inspiration here from him. :D
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moneah Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
under NO circumstance do you eat the mind honey.
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FritzyMagpies Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011   Traditional Artist
just like the Owl City song says^^
good job on this:)
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BigFatBasturd Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Short and sweeet
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CharmingCacophony Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
Short and sweet :) just from the preview I though the inspiration was the Owl City song :3
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omnislash083 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
haha Same here that's why I clicked on it. :)
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Warrior-of-Riverclan Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011   Traditional Artist
Cool :3
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Tao-mell Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty sure this only made the front page because of the picture. But whatevs :shrug:
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ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's not on the front page anymore. :) Eh, whatever floats your boat.
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elizabeth-s Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, it's back there now. That's how I found it.

Very nice poem, by the way. Short, sweet, and kind of cute. c:
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AnaturalBeauty Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, very beautiful picture and words to go with it ;)
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maxxy12 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
mmm...i love honey ^^ hehe
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:iconrayne-storme:
rayne-storme Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Its wonderful!
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TeslaRoxx Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
simple, but to the point(:
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JustNele Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Its cute
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ClandestineBatHeart1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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meerkat14 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
nice! simple, i like it :D
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