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empty void feels my heart...nothingness left
where once was creative thoughts
so very cold....i feel nothing but cold....
numbing me to my very core
i try and i try.... to break free
of this hold it has on me
try as i might...it's hold is far greater
shiver goes down my spine
as the darkness closes in all around me......
light fading fast....no where to turn
no where to run.....
just the cold....the darkness
just.....nothing.....nothing left.....
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trying to write....but not much coming....
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Let me run and howl under the moon, What does it matter I'm never going to die. I won't return, not very soon, I need to get away; all I need are wings to fly. Don't come after me or I'll turn on you. You won't know what to do or to think, I'm the monster, the beast, with a hate you never knew, So break my leash, just one link. Bend the bars of my cage, So I can spread my wings, Fly away with all my curses and rage, I'll return when the Thorn bird sings. Above all my senseless dreams I'll soar, Floating through all my old childhood memories, I'll go on, faraway from here, and know so much more, So break these bonds, I beg you,
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Did anyone notice that she winced if you raised your arm? Did anyone notice that her eyes were wide with alarm? Did anyone notice that she never looked you in the eye? Did anyone notice that her voice was but a sigh? Did anyone notice that her skin was always bruised? Did anyone question whether she might be abused? Did anyone question why she walked in obvious fear? Did anyone question why one day she did not appear? Did anyone recognize her face on the six-o’clock news? Did anyone see her remains pulled from the river refuse? Did anyone care that this quiet girl no longer exists? No.  No one did. And she will never even be missed. R.I
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zaksplat's avatar
I think you're too harsh on yourself, replace your ... with commas and stanzas, and add a few determiners 'an' etc. and you have actually a really good piece.

Gotta say something when you write about not being able to write AND do it well :D
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cinnamongurl22's avatar
thank you,
i may just redo it now
or i may leave it as is. after all this poem
got me going again:)
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HeavenlyGateKeeper's avatar
So Very Intense & Beautifully Written
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cinnamongurl22's avatar
it really was nothing
wrote in like 5 mins
just odd thoughts
running through my head
lol
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HeavenlyGateKeeper's avatar
ah well those are the best
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cinnamongurl22's avatar
sometimes....sometimes they are just words
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