Cindiq

Thanks for the critique. My drawing style have changed since 2008 (this drawing), and honestly I don't even remember how I did this. It's so long ago XD.
Although, I think I didn't intend her to be dazed looking if I remember, but thanks for your opinion on that. And thank you for taking the time to critique

Thank you so much for the wonderful critique ^^. I will keep your beautiful words in mind ^^.

This work is pretty. I really love the brush strokes you used on this painting. It gives a pastel yet painterly feeling to the artwork. I'll give to lots of thumbs up just for this (I have a brush stroke loving craze).

The vibrancy of her beautiful red hair proves you have a great eye for choosing attractive colours. The work also brings back some wonderful childhood memory for those who loved the movie. For me, though, I love the overall fairytale-feeling radiating from this pretty piece.

As pretty as this piece can get. I do feel it contains something out of place. Her upper body anatomy seems a bit weird. Maybe that's just me, but it looks like her arm is a little bit too short.

Also, as a suggestion, if you could add some more curves to her body line, it would bring out her delicacy and softness more (or princess like ^^' ). But of course, this option is totally up to you.

In all, this piece is lovely, thank you for drawing it, it certainly brings back a lot of good memories.

This is one of the nicest fanart of Bakuman I have seen so far. The drawing and colouring style is quite lovely and I personally like the details you did on various parts of the work.

The best part I like about this piece are the contrasting colours on the character (it makes his goggles stand out, which is also nicely drawn). Oh, and did I mention his hands and pose are pretty well done?

However, at times, I find myself staring at the blue bird's scarf, which draws my attention away from the main subject. I don't know if this is intentional but I find it standing out a bit too much.

Overall, You did a great job, and you should do more bakuman fanworks! I would love to see them ^^. I hope this critique helps (my first time doing it ^^' )