It looks nice.. I am a bit afraid to ask why Daala's the chosen surname, though.
This character appears in a fanfic, which is written on Russian. As in the cartoon of her last name is not called, the chosen common among the inhabitants of the planet Mandolor, but the well-known and people from the planet Bataev. Her surname is not invented by me.
Yes, I know the surname wasn't invented by you, since Daala was the first female admiral in the Galactic Empire. I was just noting that because of that, it would be a rather awkward name to give to Sonnie, since Natasi isn't Mandalorian, and doing so is comparable to giving someone the same surname as a character like Boba Fett or the Skywalkers.