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Homicide Report-
Detective McMahon
Badge number : 1025
August 26, 2014
11:34 p.m.
544 NW Tarrant St.
One deceased female age 26 Large entry wound to chest. Heart removed.
"Hey Jason what we got this time?"
"Yeah it's another one." the CSI officer said shaking his head "Same M.O. chest crushed ripped open heart removed. Human heart from previous deceased present at scene."
"How many does this make?" the detective asked
"Are we counting the one at the lake?" Jason inquired.
" No not yet anyway." replied Detective McMahon
"Five then, but there's no way we can deny they are at least connected." Jason said to the detective squinting his eyes.
"Yeah I hear ya, but there was no heart present. It's his calling card there's no way he'd leave out that little detail. This guys sick it's his ritual. They may be connected, but it may be a copy cat. I'm not giving him the credit till I'm sure." The detective pulled out his lucky zippo rubbed it with his finger as he examined the apple engraving on it's surface. As he lit his cigarette he noticed the pale ring around his left ring finger. He took a deep breath ran his fingers through his hair and exhaled.

Near the woods on an old country road near the outskirts of town a car pulled to a stop about 20 yards off the road. A young teenage couple seeking seclusion from prying eyes dimmed the lights on the car.
"Hey look at least turn on some music or something before you just start grabbing around."  The girl said to the teenage boy as he rolled his eyes and fumbled for the radio.
"Ah come on don't be a sad sport make it romantic." She laughed.
"Oh yeah" he said sarcastically "Real romantic sneaking off with me. While your boyfriend, my friend sits at home loving you. We're  not supposed to be out here anyway with the curfew and all."
"Oh please that girl died almost a month ago. And I didn't hear you complaining the last time or the time before that." She said as she unbuttoned her shirt.
"Come on you know that..
*CRASH!!!*
The car shook violently as something slammed down upon it.
"What the hell was that?!" the boy screamed as he frantically looked around. All he could see was a single black feather floating in the air above the hood.
Then suddenly his window burst into shards as he felt two steely ice cold hands reach through the window and grasp him. Pulling him out through the opening and then being tossed into a near by tree. His back smashed as he wrapped around it like a rag doll. He lay there motionless as he looked on in terror as a tall lanky figure with white hair and crystal blue eyes, that almost seemed to glow, stared at him. He worn no shirt his skin was a greyish black. He had a skull on his face, the ribcage and bones to match on his chest and arms. They seemed to be painted on. He also had the bones on the outside of his hands and fingers. He wore jeans and an old pair of shoes. The boy felt the most horrible sadness come over him. He lay there helpless as the figure changed his attention from him to the girl and moved towards the car.
"Tomy!! Tomy HELP ME!!!" she screamed as the figured jumped onto the hood of the car.
The figure smashed out the windshield, reaching inside the car, grabbing the girl and slowly dragging her out onto the hood. She didn't fight back, she lay still now.  It crouched over her and looked at Tomy while lowering it's head. The creature then whispered something in the girl's ear and kissed her on the forehead. The figure started pulling at something on his chest slowly and methodically. Tomy could hear disgusting sounds of blood dripping down and flesh rustling around as the creature seemed to be reaching inside his own chest. It then pulled out something from inside himself and lay it on the hood next to the girl. The figure then removed the girl's shirt.
"NOOOO Valerie NOOOO!!!" Tomy used the last of his strength to scream.
The figured grinned as he slammed his fist into her chest. He struck her repeatedly as bone crushed and popped with every strike. She violently shook and coughed up blood as he continued to hit her. Tomy lay motionless, all he could do was shed one tear. The tear rolled down his cheek as he watched the monster begin to rip and tear into her flesh with his bare hands. Finally he reached his prize and pulled her still beating heart from inside her. He placed her heart inside the wound he had created in his own chest. Then he dug around inside his pocket and pulled something out and placed it in his mouth. The creature then began to pull the girl's hair from her head and lay the strands of her hair neatly in rows next to each other. He took the object from his mouth which appeared to be some sort of a needle and picked up a lock of hair and began to sew his wound shut. Tomy lay silent in terror as he watched the grotesque task being executed with patience and precision. He noticed a small movement on the ground near the base of the car. He blinked his eyes to clear his vision and saw it was a small scruffy dog pouncing about wagging it's tail. The figure stepped off the car knelt down and patted the dog on the head. It spun about and wagged it's tail. The figure turned his attention back to Tomy,  then walked over and stooped down to his knees near Tomy's head. Tomy could see the horrific details of the thing's body. The black skin, skull, and, bones were apart of him not like a tattoo or painted on, but as if it were actually his skin. Tomy could see the crude stitches holding his wound together, made from Valerie's hair. The creature looked down at Tomy and tilted his head inquisitively as it reached out it's hand and wiped away Tomy's tear. Tomy could feel nothing but a horrible hopeless sadness as he stared into the thing's bright blue eyes. The figure then softly placed his hands on either side of Tomy's face. It then leaned in closer and spoke the words "Do you value your heart?"
*CRACK!!!*
And so it begins...
Listen to it narrated by The Mr. Creepypasta----> www.youtube.com/watch?v=DaY8W_…
Hobo Heart Bloody Hands by ChrisOzFulton Hobo Heart Endless by ChrisOzFulton Hobo Heart You Can Keep It by ChrisOzFulton Hobo Heart Rage by ChrisOzFulton Hobo Hand Heart by ChrisOzFulton 

DO NOT STEAL, RE-POST, CLAIM AS YOUR OWN, OR USE IN ANY WAY WITHOUT MY PERMISSION.

Copyright Statement 1 by Sophibelle
Hobo Heart is my copyrighted character. Do not use without permission. 
A big thank you to Candace, Andy, Lyndon, and MCP 
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:iconsassan79:
Sassan79 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2017  Student General Artist
Is this the origin story or the stitches one? O3O
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Stitches takes place first. 
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:iconsassan79:
Sassan79 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2017  Student General Artist
oooooohhhh okayyy
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:icondestinee-lol:
Destinee-lol Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2017
This is my new favorite story! Well... Besides eyeless jack... But it's a close second!
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
awesome! thanks!
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:iconfoolycoolydood:
FoolyCoolyDood Featured By Owner May 2, 2017
I love the story! The artwork is amazing as well! He's one of my favorite characters.
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner May 8, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
awesome!!! so glad you like him!
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:iconmonacasket:
monacasket Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the storie!
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner May 8, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
glad you like it!!!
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:iconmonacasket:
monacasket Featured By Owner May 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconmisscreepy2015:
MissCreepy2015 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I always assumed the dog was an Affenpinscher, considering that it's a scruffy dog.
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Hmmm maybe
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:iconhe-mei:
He-Mei Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!!! THIS THING IS THE EMBODIMENT OF DEPRESSION!!!! I KNOW WHAT TO BASE MY RECOVERY PICTURE ON!!!!
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:iconnikki12121:
nikki12121 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
you should make hobo heart merch i know so many people that would buy it 
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I sell prints of him
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:iconjaquelinemhz:
JaquelineMhz Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Student General Artist
I loved it! I wonder what "M.O"? I am Brazilian and I did not ^^'
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:iconilucia:
Ilucia Featured By Owner Edited Jul 14, 2016
Awesome!! Would you mind if I translate it into german (for youtube, I'll narrate it)? I'll give you full credits and stuff. :)
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Sure!
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:iconilucia:
Ilucia Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016
Thank you aaand :D
Here it is: www.youtube.com/watch?v=7NvV4W…
Just that you know it's mine. Credits are in the description :)
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thats so awesome!!!
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:iconilucia:
Ilucia Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016
Thank you <3.
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Shadow-Lovers-1000 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Have you seen is? I hope you don't get mad witth them.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=C8-ygb…
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
doesn't bother me at all.

what bothers me is this.
www.quotev.com/story/5995923/C…

this person is claiming to be the author and the youtube channel used this as the link to the original story.
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WhisperDeathrow16 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016
I love your art, this story, this OC and the art you did for Madame Macabre's song!

You are literally amazing at writing and art, and I aspire to be as good as you one day! You are awesome :DDD
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
You'll be better than me, never stop
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:iconwhisperdeathrow16:
WhisperDeathrow16 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
Thank you! That means a lot ^^
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:iconrosette-99:
Rosette-99 Featured By Owner May 27, 2016  Student General Artist
I came here from Madame Macabre's Song for Hobo Heart <3
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Awesome! I love that song!
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:iconrosette-99:
Rosette-99 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Student General Artist
Your story and Creepypasta is lucky to have a great song :D
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:iconlovemetenderalways:
lovemetenderalways Featured By Owner May 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I never had a favorite creepy pasta but I do now. Thank you.
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
:) glad you like it!
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PlumSweetMask Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Me too. Isn't that song great!😉
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:iconlovemetenderalways:
lovemetenderalways Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yes it is
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:iconkittycookies575:
kittycookies575 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2016  Hobbyist
AUGUST 26 IS THE DAY AFTER MY BIRTHDAY. SH*T.
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:iconthebestpotatoe:
TheBestPotatoe Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Just don't cheat and you'll be good.
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:iconghostlover25:
ghostlover25 Featured By Owner May 29, 2016
same
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kittycookies575 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016  Hobbyist
Coolness
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
;)
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YukiLongfang Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
YO THAT WAS THE SHIT!!!! OMG, THIS IS NOW MY NEW FAV CREEPYPASTA!!!!!! XD
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
:) glad you liked it!
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AuroraAkkaris Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, that was awesome *u*
Can I have a question?
Can I please translate it to czech language and put it on my Creepypasta blog? (I will credit you of course ^w^)
Aaaand... I'm gonna draw him soon ^^
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Sure of course. Just give me credit :)
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:iconauroraakkaris:
AuroraAkkaris Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, sure!! By the way, sorry that it took so long, I was kinda busy and lazy at the same time, but finally the translation is here!

kingdom-of-creepypasta.blog.cz…

By clicking on used pictures in the article people will get to your dA profile, i thought it was the best way to credit authors of pictures, so I hope it's fine... ^^ Link back to the original story is under the whole translation btw xD And I have another question, can I also translate Hobo Heart Stitches please? With crediting you same way as I did here? ;w;
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ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Sure
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NerdPrideM8 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There seems to be an excessive use of gore in this story just for the sake of gore. Gore alone is not scary but, if you shoehorn in the gore into a deeper story. The open-endedness is good for suspense but if  you were trying to get these published by a real company you would have to add an ending. I like how you leave a lot to the imagination leaving the reader trying to figure out why he does this and why his skin is the way it is. The inclusion of the dog was pointless but I'm glad you didn't add more excess gore by slaughtering the random dog. There were also a few spelling/grammar issues but you were good with that for the most part. Overall, good story, a few flaws, awesome that MCP read it, congrats.
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks
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:iconcharlottelaantz:
charlottelaantz Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is this up on creepypasta wiki or something hehe ? :)
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:iconchrisozfulton:
ChrisOzFulton Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Not on wiki, i didnt allow it to be posted there. 
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charlottelaantz Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh okay ^-^
I love this story to death! Haha
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