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It hurts? Doesn't it?

When you find out it's not you
It's someone else they love.

All that agony over
what should I wear?
what should I say?
what should I do?

And you see them with someone else.
It's disappointing? Isn't it?

The pit of your stomach falls,
and you feel like you'll throw up all of the feelings;
but what's the worst part?

They never knew it was you.
Not a fun feeling.
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xRinoaxlovexangelsx Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I know exactly what this feeling is, I've expirienced it once before, and I cried a LOT! It's not a fun feeling indeed so I know very well how you felt when you wrote this :)

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JanCeeW Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
I just wanted to say that this is a beautiful poem. If I did not know any better, I thought my 14 year old daughter would have written it! This explains her pain perfectly. Thank you. I plan to share it with her.
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Chooch13 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
Thank you for that. I'm a teenager too, so it's coming firsthand.
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arwen-princess Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
i agree...not a fun feeling...at all
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