well you're welcome.the mag size is slightly bigger than A5 just in case you wonder.And have no worries, I'm pretty sure the background is too light because of the print process and paper quality.Anyway good job and keepme in mind for possible future collabs heheh.It would be my pleasure to work together heheh.Good luck m8.
Pretty good job.I 'm from Bulgaria and thought that it was work by Bulgarian designer alone. But it was JaxeNL style just a bit too much.Wonder what the others designers have bring along. The circle around the men are quite fresh, the rest is maybe too messy and not very good placed.It is a small format magazine and it's quite a challenge to use the space wisely and effective.The background is too light, it's hardly noticeable in real life.The details are excellent, but once again they are lost in print process and the size.The vinyl and movie reel aren't the best, honestly I think would do better without.But the best is that the illustration is totally different than the rest and really stand out.Personally I would add more bold colors in the back,but that's just me.Again a job well done and congrats to all.
I was asked to do a critique and actually don't know why.It's a pretty damn good job and it's the first one by iruhdam.The smoke effect is very used technique and very tricky too,this artwork give a godlike and mysterious feeling, I like that a lot.I don't like the repeating tails of the upper small bulbs, if they were different it would look more alive and vivid.The distance between them could be a more random and wider too.A different sizes would help as well for a more dynamic and energy atmosphere.The soft smoke background is also too pattern like and end too suddenly.The down right angle, the big one and the smaller inside is great, congrats.I like the contrast and light play, well done indeed.The only thing I'm sure that we will seeing more good stuff form the author.Finger crossed and may the wind be at your back!