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Some Lena Practice too.    
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Shuman100 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see a curse mark
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chibipanda25 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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Eternal-Shadow-S Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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It's not too bad. The best advice I can give you is to both study and practice up on anatomy and poses. Your work clearly shows you've got an idea and your expressions have personality and life to it. However, as I said, it's best that you study and practice the anatomy and poses a bit more. The arms and legs seem a bit out of proportion and the balancing seems quite off. In the back pose, her forearm is way too long, much longer than the rest of her arm. Next, her torso is appears too small. Again, this is from the pose in her back. What especially makes this look awkward is that the spinal line draws all the way through her hip or butt, which it shouldn't. Now, last piece of advice. When drawing tears, water, or liquid, it would be best not to use color black to draw them. I'd suggest making them perhaps blue, or any other color, as black gives a more solid feel.

Overall, it's not bad, but could use improvement. The criticism is more focused on the image where you could see her back, as that's where it really stands out as a bit off. All I can really tell you is to work on the anatomy and poses. Don't stop! Keep doing what you can!
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chibipanda25 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hi!
Thank you for your critique.
At first I was confused by your comment when you said back arm, as I actually think that arm is pretty good, then I realized that you meant the risen arm and was just ahhh. I see what you mean about it aha.

I am a little confused on how her torso is too small, but I'll look into it further after doing some more practice.

And thank you So much for such a meaningful comment! I'm very concerned with the personality and liveliness tbh, so that was relieving to hear. Thanks again!
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DEKAPANMAN Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! you art is so good! you just got yourself a watcher!
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chibipanda25 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omigosh, thank you!
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