Paper Mario: BoA Chapter 2

Hey, Look at this!
Since a lot of you guys seem to have enjoyed my Paper Mario: The Book of Ages idea (or perhaps only the drawing, but who cares), I decided to do little pictures on each chapter during the paper adventure.
Picking up where I left off here [link] , let's continue with Chapter 2.
Mario's next objective led him again out of Countdown Town into Gwah Ha Har Gorge [link] . Down the winding road Mario goes, battling many Beanies and Rexes along the way. But before they could get to there destination, they run into Wario and Waluigi [link] (Sorry, I did not draw them for there isn't much room for them, but don't worry. I'll eventually draw them(probably in Chapter 8) who know what Mario is collecting and want the instruments for themselves. [link] fight, Mario wins (or by chance, you could lose), and The Wario "bros." scurry off swearing they get Mario next time. More of the Gorge they travel, and eventually come up to the large and imposing Chuckola Cola Brewery. At the gate, they run into young Beanish Girl named Miss Beanary. She needs help opening the gate, as it seems to be malfunctioning (You know, it's one of those that automatically opens), so Mario uses Boomley to blast there way in. As they enter Mario runs into McKenzie, the hatted bumpty, who looks like had arrived really early and had fallen asleep. He says he's here to get free Chuckola cola, as he said, "My friend, who's a police officer, found a little mouser in one of your colas, and he puked, eh. And, uh, so do I get a free Chuckola Cola?" Now this shocked present president Peanubody, who acquired the title after his late brother, and founder of the brewery, named Mr. Leguman died in an accident. Then Peanubody married his brothers wife. Anyways, before I go way off topic, Mr. Peanubody hires McKenzie to inspect the bottling plant. Mario and friends then ask him if they've got a Night Sky Instrument. But instead of answering the question, he hires them instead. So, they start there job, but before they get comfortable, they get an e-mail on Mario's Mailbox DS (or whatever, it really doesn't matter) Telling them, in a spooky matter that something strange is a foot, and if Mario figures it out, they will find the Nebula Marimba. So Mario and gang set out to find out, but before they really get anywhere, McKenzie decides to tag a long too. Well, as I really don't want to bore you with too much detail, (Not that I've really figured this out exactly anyways) but as Mario runs around the Brewery finding clues as he continues to get these weird e-mails, it is revealed that Miss Beanary is actually the daughter of the deceased president and has recently inherited the entire brewery. And that Brewmiester Snifles (Who has a funny European accent, or something) Has done some shifty things, such as extensive security measures, and the odd noises coming from the basement. Well, as it turns out, (yep, I really don't want to go really far into detail) Old Mr. Leguman was actually killed by Snifles and with the help of Peanubody, staged the supposed accident. And that they were plotting to kill the little miss Beanary. Not only that, but the e-mail's that Mario had been receiving were actually from the ghost of Mr. Leguman (Sorry, I didn't draw him, but do you really care?) With that Snifles and Peanubody escape to the basement, but accidentally dropping a key to the basement. This allows Mario to access the basement (This along with the Girlie hat you receive in Chapter 1 stay with you every time you go back in time, so you can fight the boss again, much like you did in Majora's Mask). As they fight there way down . They come across the guilty men. But they unveil a giant robot, the Chuckolabot 8800. They killed Leguman after they found out about this tyrannical mechanical monster. Snifles created it to run entirely on Chuckola cola, to rule all of Gwah Ha Har Gorge, and perhaps the whole world. With that Mario battles the machine. During the battle, as you hurt Chuckola Bot, the Meter on his head goes from Green, to yellow and then to red, ending in his demise. But Brewmiester Snifles will occasionally refill the robots fuel tanks with Chuckola Cola, resulting in reviving the robot (So beat Snifles first, before the robot is what I'm trying to get at). After the battle, the robot explodes and out comes the Nebula Marimba. Thus triggering the "END OF CHAPTER" sequence. Then you get to control Yoshi (Like you would with Peach in previous two Paper Mario games) who is in Countdown Town. With his story ending up telling you that the next Night Sky Instrument is in the Furui Village in the Minami Mountains. Now back to Mario, who is waving goodbye to the Miss Beanary and the reformed Peanubody and incarcerated Snifles. Mckenzie, finding the adventure to be better than free Chuckola cola, decides to keep on traveling with Mario. So now Mario has four party members who now have two instrument out of 7.
Yep, that sums up my idea. And I'm amazed that you read the whole thing! Unless you cheated and skiped most of it, you cheeky little.... Anyways, if you are wondering, some of my ideas before might have changed (Like how I got rid of that chef bob-omb for the Bomb Boo in the previous chapter). And if you are wondering, since this is like Majora's Mask, you can go back in time anytime you want, and you can "redo" chapters as some side quest will need those story arcs to be complete.
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