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my Gravity Falls OC


Hmmm. Gravity Falls OC, you say? I’m not good at making character designs, but i’m tried. ;__;

I don’t know how to name this cute strange girl. Maybe Hazel, idk. She’s 13 old, with short haircut and chubby cheeks. Hazel has some kinda mental problems(she’s very hot-tempered. Like craazy). Haz doesn’t like to make friends, because of her temper and her interests. Hey, but Mabel and Dipper don’t care about that. :D 

Hazel is an artist, really creative person. She’s a realist and good at archery. Her symbol - llama from Bill Wheel.(so sorry)

Gravity Falls©Alex Hirsch
Hazel(or i don't know how to name characteres)

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mabeltillypines's avatar

who...wait i think i've met her...

Herowebcomics's avatar
She is very cute!
And she could have some great drama and depth in her story!
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Your OC is perfect. You made the character appear young enough to hang out with the mystery twins and not to old where it would be another teenager. I also think the personality is also another item that is perfect. Most Gravity Falls OCs tend to be always happy and cheerful, but the fact that yours has a little bit of an aggressive/ angry side breaks the norm. I also love that she is an artist. Not a lot of OCs go down the artistic route.

The only thing wrong is the little bit of a lack of originality. The personality and age isn't the issue. It is more in the facial features. Hazel's face appears to be extremely similar to Mabel and Dipper's. It looks as though she could be one of their distant relatives.

Other than that, your OC is great. The poses and personality is great along with the clothesfit her personality perfectly.
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This is my first Critique, so sorry if I do anything wrong <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

The vision in this OC is stunning! It looks just like a real Gravity Falls character that you've portrayed! Hazel has been well designed and presented very well with the expressions you've given her.

The originality in Hazel is really surprising, since a lot of OC's I've seen in the Gravity Falls fandom are just different versions of current characters of the show. This is defiantly what I'd call an OC. Her clothing style is all it's own, and isn't a copy-off of any other character. Very well done!

The technique is practically flawless! Nice shading, and colour usage!

Hazel has an awesome impact on me, and possibly others, as a creative badass! Adding on the fact that she can be just as "adorkable" as Mable, which is yet again another sense that Hazel seems like an actual character from the show!

Overall, she's an awesome OC, however I'd love to see more of a story around her. I'd be looking forward to seeing more of her!
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She's absolutely adorable~ I really love her hair style and her outfit is really cute too! I especially like her jacket.<
that llama necklace tho.

Now the thing with character design is that you always want to make the character's design project their personality unless it's made to be ironic. She definitely looks like a potential hot head! She even looks like she could be a little reserved and keeps to herself.

I'd say her form could use a little work. Even though Gravity Falls has a set look for its tween characters, it would do her good to make her more unique in terms of body type and head shape. If you want to go that face, perhaps lower her face, or make her chin less rounded as those chubby cheeks would be her trademark.

Overall, stellar expressions and poses! Your coloring also really stands out, coupled with that partially color coded line work it really makes for a unique take on a trending style.
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She is adorable! She's not too over-done and doesn't appear to be a mary-sue of any sort that I can see so far. I like how she doesn't look like every-other OC on gravity falls, and that she isn't related to the Pines in any way. (yes, there are those)

The only thing I would like is more of a backstory. Some details about her family life, how she came to be here, and why she would be a symbol in the Books. That's the only thing that I would like for you to add/improve upon.

gotta fill the minimum words yo
Deadlynightshade555's avatar
AWWW! She's so cute, hope to see more of her.
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Zahra-Pines's avatar
wow! your gravity falls style is really awesome!!Sparkly MabelMable Raise The Roof
nice work! Thumbs Up[Gravity Falls]
littleblueartist's avatar
She looks amazing! If I have time is it ok if I draw her???
smurfysmurf12345's avatar
I thought that was Luna from The Loud House for a second. 
Emaliasart's avatar
she looks so cute! I love it
Emaliasart's avatar
by the way what's her name?
Anton0morrow's avatar
could you draw me in gravity falls style? 
Herowebcomics's avatar
She is so cute!
She looks like she's related to Dipper!
KaneIsScared's avatar
To cute I love it 
IAteASoulYesterday's avatar
Wow shes very well made! She looks like me kinda XD!
hello can you join my team i need a drawer do like this stuff
great designs you have here, would u mind if i use some of them?
wow, i really like your designs, would u mind if i use some of them ??
Gravitydown's avatar
I would like to use her in Prideflower Falls.
theolivethief14's avatar
i'd really love to see more of this character!
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