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Daily Deviation
April 7, 2021
Inevitable by Chelsinator9000
Featured by Zara-Arletis

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Literature Text

This morning

I am

tangled sheets

clinging to the surface of your sea-salted skin.

Marred with bloody knees

from falling off the wagon,

and I know...

I must smell

like liquid regret

because last night,

my cup was always at least half empty.

and when you wake up,

I will tell you

all the ways I have to leave.

There will be potholes in my story,

and you will eventually describe me

as something to be avoided.

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discontentbeauty's avatar
Wow. This is an phenomenal poem. If I weren't half asleep I could articulate better. Damn fine word choices.
rnjayne's avatar

Wincingly honest.

Theeartistkid's avatar

Congrats on the dd!

kwjibo-deviations's avatar

Heartbreaking, but wonderfully written,

FountainsOfMars's avatar
This IS remarkable!!
LindArtz's avatar

Deep stuff. Very. Well done!!! :clap: Congrats on your much Deserved, DD!

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Zara-Arletis's avatar

Beautifully written morning-after poetry. It hurts my heart.

Barosus's avatar

This is uncomfortable because it feels too true, but I can't deny its impact. Well said. Dark and self-effacing, but well said.

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