PMD: LS + FP Mission 4 Pt 1-1

Part 1 Page 1

And here we are folks, the beginning of Mission 4 for Team LoveShock! Man I am so excited to get this mission going, I tell you what. All sorts of crazy stuff's gonna go down and it's gonna be a blast HEH.

So for this mission I wanted to try and do some improvements in my drawing. For instance, I wanted to do more detailed backgrounds and I'm gonna try and get my line weights a little more varied here too. Though I hope by drawing more detailed backgrounds it doesn't make the images too busy! Lemme know if it does guys or if you have any other critiques on it too that'd be swell.
The only downside to all this is I think the quality of the word balloons are gonna be down considering I can't quite fit all the text in a neat little marquee tool bubble, so I have to draw em all out by myself. Ah well I will try to make em look good!
WOW OKAY stop babblin and get to the story! GOSH anyways yeah lookit little Ringo bein all responsible and going out for training! What a big step that little fella's taking. ;m; Also say hi and bye to little Jane, cause it's the last time you'll see her throughout this comic haha

Oh did I mention I'm collaborating with someone on this? We shall see the team in a couple of pages hehee
GOD CAN THIS DESCRIPTION BE ANY LONGER okay I'm gonna quit now

Team Application
Prologue || Next || Last >