Hello everyone, in my profile i mentioned that i am a "story writer".So i decided to,you know,upload some of that stories here.
My story is MLP story.This is my first experience in it,so i believe you will see a lot of mistakes.If you see them-feel free to say about that. I still don't have a name for this story. And this story was written for comics, but if you saw my "artwork", you know that as a comic it probably will never appear( if someone else will draw it, it may appear sooner
Well, i guess i can start, so here it is.
Near night Twilight was in her wood home(like in the first seasons of MLP FiM show(it was rebuilded)),and as usual she were reading books, Spike was nearby and were biting a ruby.
Spike: Well it is nice, that Celestia ordered to rebuild your old house!
Twilght: Yes, Spike.Sometimes i am getting tired of my castle, but here i can be like in the nice old times.
It is obviously time to go sleep, but a sudden belch from Spike changed the plans, that was a message from princess Celestia.
Spike: Look, Twilight!It is a message from princess Celestia!
Twilight: Let me look at it, quickly!
Spike gave it to her.
Message: "My dear Twilight, and again i wished to congratulate you for your deeds as princess of friendship, but unfortunately, now i have to tell you about much worse things.I received multiple reports, about strange behaviour among ponies.They do antisocial things: they gather at night by unknown reasons, speak about weird things, and do aggression to anyone who wish to contact them.I thought that was just one-time events, but it is happening over and over again.I am afraid that we are dealing with something very serious.Those who i sent to investigate, cannot tell me something useful, that is why i ask you.Twilight, try to discover what is going on.
According to the data i have, some groups of those "strange" ponies gathering near your friendship castle, if you will go there right now, you will be able to find them.Gather all information that you can.
Spike: Wow, looks like it is a big deal!
Twilight: Indeed!Celestia wouldn't ask me for help, if it wasn't so.I will go there right now!
Twilight flew away from her home to the friendship castle.
Near it, she found a group of cloaked ponies, they were jumping near bonfire and were doing exactly the stuff princess Celestia talked about.
"Strange ponies": Soon!It comes!It begins!We must hurry!Mustn't keep the master waiting!
Twilight appeared near them.
Twilight: Excuse me, could you tell me please what's going on here?(friendly smile)
Zero reaction, "strange ponies" were doing the same stuff as before.
Twilight: Perhaps you did not hear me....
Twilight: Excuse me!
Twilight: EXCUSE ME PLEASE!!!
Twilight launched a beam to the bonfire.
"Strange ponies" stopped, they looked at Twilight very unfriendly.
Twilight: I am sorry for your bonfire, but you just were ignoring me, so, friends, could you tell me please....
"Strange ponies" abruptly charged to Twilight.
They began to try to bite and push Twilight.
Twilight: Ouch!What are you doing!Stop it right now!
Twilight was trying to dodge all attacks.
Twilight: I don't want this to be this way!
"Strange ponies" tried the same thing, but with more anger.
Twilight: You left me no choise....
Twilight launched AOE magic attack which shut "Strange ponies" down.
Twilight: I just came to talk, and what do we have here?They just attacked me!Celestia was right, there is something really weird....
Twilight: Huh?What was that?
Twilight saw a strange cloaked pony figure, that looked at her from the tree.
From the dark, only eyes could be seen, and it's evil smile.
Twilight: Who are you?
Figure started to run away.
Twilight followed her.
Twilight: Wait up!
Figure hided over the hill, Twilight followed, but that figure disappeared.
Twilight: Where did it go?It could not hide IN hill.Maybe that was a dream?Strange....
Twilight returned to the place, where she dealed with "Strange ponies", but they disappeared too.
Twilight: Whatta?They couldn't woke up so fast.I don't like this...
Twilight decided to go back to home.
During her way to home she started to think.
Twilight: What a strange stuff do we have here, those ponies were mad, and who was that pony, who hided on the tree?Too much strange thigs for one night, don't you agree?
Twilight suddenly saw another "Strange pony", who ran from someone or to someone.
Twilight: Or maybe not.
Twilight flew follow him, she looked forward and saw another group of "Strange ponies".
She rushed to the "Strange pony", after who she was following, shut him down, weared his cloak, and jumped to other "Strange ponies".
Twilight: Hope it works... ghm..now!act!we have to!.....
"Strange ponies": Yes!We must go!
All ponies started to run somewhere.
Twilight went with them.
"Strange ponies" held a bags with something alive inside.
Night completely came over all Equestria.
They all jumped on the marge, Twillight did the same.
There was another group of "Strange ponies".
"Strange ponies" threw their bags near bonfire.
Suddenly in front of them appeared the pony, who disappeared over the hill, when Twilight tried to chase her.
Twilight(in her mind): There she is, that wasn't a dream that time.All of this is her job, no doubts.
Pony-figure: Ahhh at last all my friends are here, you bring some gifts with you,good,very good...
Pony-figure opened the bags, there were normal ponies...binded.
Twilight opened her mouth, because of astonishment, but quickly closed it.
Pony-figure: Great!They would be a nice sacrifice for the mighty Lord Tigeron!
Twilight just saw, that for a second Pony-figure looked directly at her and in her eyes was an evil shine.
Pony-figure: Fellas!I have another good new for you!
Twilight(in her mind): This is definetely not good....
Pony-figure: Our little camp visited princess of friendship-Twilight Sparkle!
With that words Pony-figure undisguised Twilight.
Pony-figure: Princess Twilight, your presence is an honor for us, but next time warn us, so we will be able to prepare l a r g e greetings!
Twilight: If you introduced me to everyone, why wouldn't you introduce yourself to me?
Twilight undisguised Pony-figure.
That was a black alicorn.
She had a metallic helmet on her head, she had an amulet on her neck.
She had an armor on her legs.
Front right leg instead of hoof had a kind of metallic thimble.
Her horn was halved in the upper part.
Twilight: Yyyou are an alicorn?
Pony-figure: Yes, princess.My name is Fallenlight and yes, i gathered all those ponies, but their "madness" is not my deeds, at least for the most part.
Twilight: What do you mean?
Fallenlight: You see, all those ponies are charged with the energy of Lord Tigeron, their body and mind are adapting to it, aswell as energy is adapting to them.But soon it will be over.Their mind will be clear...in some ways.... What is my part in it?Well, someone has to bring the lambs...and that's me...
Twilight: Lord Tigeron?Who is that?And why you or him do all this stuff?
Fallenlight: Lord Tigeron is the mightiest creature ever existed.He goes from the world to the world, to drain all the energy from there and to spread his servants to the worlds.This time he chose this world.We are Tigronytes, we are his servants, we do everything to bring him here, and we do everything to make more of us.
Twilight: I don't know what are you talking about and i don't care, but no matter what you plan to do - i shall stop you!
Fallenlight: Ain't gonna happen.
Twilight: We shall see...
Fallenlight flashed back from Twilight.
Fallenlight: You have to deal with them first.Get her,boys!
"Strange ponies" rushed to Twilight, they attacked her with more anger, than previous ones.
Twilight was unable to do AOE this time, so she had to shut them down one by one.
Fallenlight watched this and enjoyed.
As soon as Twilight handled with the last one, she looked up to Fallenlight.
Fallenlight: Very good, Twilight, perhaps you became princess not because of your beautiful eyes.
Twilight: I became princess because of THIS!
Twilight launched a beam to Fallenlight.
Fallenlight did the same, but her beam was much larger and stronger.
Fallenlight's beam crushed Twilight's beam and stroke Twilight.
Twilight hit the tree behind her.
Fallenlight: See?And this is not even my medium attack.
Twilight trying to stand up: Okay, you're strong, but i won't go so easy on you!
Fallenlight: Oh, really?
Fallenlight cast an energy chains on Twilight which binded her.
Twilight tried to set her free, but the chains were too strong.
Fallenlight walked to Twilight.
Fallenlight: A kind of tightly chains isn't it?Sure it is!Your determinaton is impressive, but without power it is nothing.
Fallenlight scratched Twilight's head.
After that Fallenlight swinged with her "special leg" through the air, and that action cut the matter, and cause a strange hole to appear.
She put all "strange ponies" in that hole, and those ponies, who were in bags.
Twilight: Argh..what are you doing?!Bring them back!
Fallenlight: Do not worry, Twilight, they will return...soon...
Fallenlight started to disappear in that hole.
Fallenlight: I would gladly stay with you and torment you to death, but i have so much things to do, and so little time.And you still have to serve "the great purpose".See you soon!
Fallenlight disappeared and the hole closed.
Twilight crushed the chains.
Twilight: That Fallenlight, she is strong...very strong.Looks like we have some serious troubles.I have to tell everything to princess Celestia!
Twilight made her way to Celestia.
In some cave.
"Strange ponies" were doing some weird stuff.
Fallenlight watched at the exit of that cave.
Fallenlight: Sooo, Twilight, your testing has begun, do not fail me....
Any feedback is welcome.
Whom i am kidding no one will read this ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)