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Wandering Jack (Part 1)
By Cristen E. Rose
PART ONE of my newest steampunk short story.
Continued in PART TWO: [link]
Here's Lancelot: :thumb316342449: [link]
This story will be broken up into several parts due to length. Also, I have no idea if it really deserves a mature rating for sexual themes as suggested here, so I figured better safe than sorry.
Please comment and let me know how I can improve this. As a writer, I'm a work in progress, and I treasure your feedback.
Thanks for reading!
All the characters here are original and copyrighted by me. Don't use them or the text without my permission.
©2012 Cristen E. Rose.
By Cristen E. Rose
PART ONE of my newest steampunk short story.
Continued in PART TWO: [link]
Here's Lancelot: :thumb316342449: [link]
This story will be broken up into several parts due to length. Also, I have no idea if it really deserves a mature rating for sexual themes as suggested here, so I figured better safe than sorry.
Please comment and let me know how I can improve this. As a writer, I'm a work in progress, and I treasure your feedback.
Thanks for reading!
All the characters here are original and copyrighted by me. Don't use them or the text without my permission.
©2012 Cristen E. Rose.
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© 2012 - 2022 CERose
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This had me grinning all the way through! Jack is a wonderful character, he reminds me of a character I'm currently building for a role-play adventure! *scampers off to the second chapter*