Professor Goro Makabe at work in the laboratory of the police department. Sipping on a highly cancerigenous, sugar coated, caffeinated drink while keeping an eye on his patient. Then, a wild agent appears.
To be frank, I'm disappointed with the render. The perspective is wrong and the lights are odd, but heh. I spent too much time on this thing.
[ Ink and alcohol markers on paper. ] [ + 8 hours ]
Disappointed or not, so long as you had fun with the drawing and use it as a learning experience it's all good -3- Although I understand us artists are seldom kind to ourselves and always strive for 'perfection'.
I like the choice of colours and bright lighting but there does seem to be a lack of depth in the image; contrast is consistent throughout the image giving it a 'flat' appearance. I won't address the perspective as you've already touched up on that, but playing around in photoshop can easily fix it c:
Yup, yup, you're right about the contrast. I've been too lazy to put different depth values there (I'm awful when a piece has taken too long I tend to sabotage the final but necessary touchs). It could actually be a nice piece to "redraw" in a few months or so!
It's mainly on the right : the furniture's lines cross in a way that can't possibly be unless the furniture (on the floor, the long one) is bent, which is very unlikely. It's mainly due to the fact I used a single line as a reference to focus my lines instead of a dot or anything precise, as I tend to prefer doing things "by hand" even if inaccurate than using a ruler. It looks more natural... well, except when I'm absent-minded and fail my lines : p