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Cyberpunk - The Line

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to late for text, more coming soon

Added the Work in Progress Stages i had saved to my gallery as a handy gif file
Cyberpunk - The Line: Work in Progress Stages by Celarx

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10GU86's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I wanted to give this 5/5 all around, but you asked for a critique- not for me to jerk you off. so allow me to say that this is one of my favorite cyberpunk pieces ever <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> The vision is top notch because- damn, i haven't seen anything like this… The originality is yeah, you guessed it- same reason… Technique flawless- with the point of origin on the light sources of the guns, the whole image is magnificent! The only caveat- is that you have her using a remote… If there is one thing cyberpunk has taught me, it is that you can do more with your mind than your eyes… if she has a holographic interface before her, there is no need for a button- however symbolic it is.
Celarx's avatar
Thanks for taking your time to write down your thoughts and sharing it with me.
As the artist of the piece i share a sickness many creative people do, once the image is finished all that is left over are the mistakes and things I could have done better next time.
Therefore it is reassuring to read that people actually like the image, because if i were to write my own critique it wouldn't even get close to being as favourable as yours.
10GU86's avatar
Don't be so hard in y'self, luv :D it's awesome >_>

wowww !!! can i use in my background video music ? =D

skywriter33's avatar
That is fucking cool. Love 
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AMpics's avatar
the buildings reminded me harkonnen's pyramid from dune 2000 :D
Celarx's avatar
dune (at least the first book) is  in general an awesome inspiration for me but here i thought more of a structure that looks massive and imposing while still being easy to fortify and blastwave resistant :)
CarlHolden's avatar
Good and interesting piece, I'd just tighten up the leather edges on the arm as your backgrounds have harder edges than the character in some places.
Celarx's avatar
heyho, sorry for the late reply, thanks a lot for taking your time and writing the critique.
you are totally rigth, and in hindsight i regret not taking the extra time to make the leather jacket "crisp" all around :/
anyways thanks a lot :)
hope you like my other cyberpunk images too!
Furecer's avatar
While this is quite the amazing cyberpunk piece, something about the woman's body seems a bit off. I don't know if it's the angle of the head/face, or the size of the arm, but something seems... well, like I said, a little off.

Otherwise, like I said, pretty amazing.
Celarx's avatar
heyho, thanks a lot for your feedback, you're right anatomy is still a huge problem for me and sadly i do not have enogh hours in the day to practice it as much as i'd like to.
But my journey didn't end with this one image so there's still a lot to improve and one day I'll be out of the uncanney valley of anatomy :D

Thanks for your comment and glad you took the time to take a 2nd look at the image :)
templar127's avatar
THIS IS AWESOME!!!!
Celarx's avatar
thanks a lot :)
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LilithSchlangenauge's avatar
Meine Güte, das ist der Hammer, du hast dich wirklich weiterentwickelt.
Celarx's avatar
haha, danke sehr, ist aber noch viel zu tun :D
10GU86's avatar
this is pretty sweet >_<
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DalSifoDyas's avatar
Ich find es ist echt toll geworden =)
Celarx's avatar
danke und vielen dank nochmal für deine ratschläge und einflüsse
RevealedFromtheVoy's avatar
Really awesome !

The armor is awesome, the girl face is awesome,the arcologies are awesome, the red button is awesome, everything is awesome !
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haha thanks, glad you like it so much :)
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