Date: March 21 2019
Materials Used: Sketch pencil (4H), regular eraser, Faber Castell 4 Pitt Artist Pens - Black (S, F, M & B) and Copic Ciao Markers (R29 & R46)
I started this drawing sometime in Janurary and I thought I could finish this drawing quite fast but due to other important priorities I couldn't finish it until last month in March. This is a drawing of BoA again but in black and white version using ink pens to ink it after the draft sketch drawing of her. I think it turn out not so bad even though there are some mistakes to it.
A short critique
I love the style here! Especially the hair and the eye look amazing The minimal colors are also a very nice touch, and go well with the more simple style. The prepositions look good too.
To the things you could improve. I might add just a little shading to the lips, as they get a lot of attention due to their color. Right now they look a little flat. I'm not entirely sure what the thing in the bottom right corner is (a plant?), but it does look quite good. Maybe try to make it more obvious what it really is.
But all in all this is a lovely drawing! The colors work great, and the way you drew the eye is just amazing. Keep it up!
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My first impression is that this is a beautiful piece! The minimal color gives it a classy pop, which is very appealing. You have done very well on the facial proportions as well. Even if you used a reference (which is respectable) the proportions have still carried over nicely. The eye is probably the best part of the drawing.
One thing I think would improve the piece is sticking to a level of realism. The hair is highly detailed and realistic which clashes with the slightly more cartoony face. This is not too bad, it just makes the piece look a little disorganized. Either shading portions of the face or simplifying the hair would make it better.
Overall, I love the composition but he clash of styles makes the drawing a bit strange. Keep up the good work!