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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The colors are muted nicely that it looks ashy. It don't know if this was your original intention, but the painting looks like a watercolor painting, especially the clouds which looks soft. I like how the edges of the clouds just tapper off, so it does look more realistic instead of a solid outline. The expression on Luna's face is an excellent choice because she looks contemplative and somber. Her tail was drawn nicely and the curling end reminds me of a swirling galaxy.

On the other side of the coin, I would like to see more stars in the background. Not a whole lot, just a few more to make it look more complete. Also, the mane could be a bit more flowing like her tail because it looks like she got a perm job. Her face could be restructured because her muzzle looks like a duck bill instead of a pony face and she needs a more prominent cheek because it looks like she doesn't have one. Last thing is her wings. They are oddly shaped, so I recommend making them a bit fuller.

Overall, it's a nice piece. I'm personally not much of a fan of artwork with muted colors, preferring vibrant rich colors, but this is one of the exceptions. I look forward to any future work that you do.