One Direction

First of all, I am not a directioner nor a hater. Zayn's figure is perfect and so is Niall's. Liam's shoulder is a bit off and his shirt is a bit long (not the sleeves of course). It's too big for him. I think Harry's coat is a little big too. Louis' pants is too low so if you look at his shirt it will look too long because it's tucked-in. Their shoes are perfect and adorable. I didn't said that this is not amazing 'cause it is. It takes a talent to draw an anime out of a real person and I must say that you have that talent.

Omg it's one direction!!!!!!! I just luv it!!!! One direction is my heroes n their r the cutest people in the world!!!!!!!!!! U draw one direction so beautify, it can make anybody luv them like they were the only cute things in the world!!!!!!!
Everybody will luv them bcuz of ur drawing of them. U drawing Zayn so dreamy, Harry so cute, Louis handsome, Niall is a big cutie, and Liam is a dearly!!!!! One direction is the only thing people breath, hear, n see!!!(sound like a creeper....) but one direction r the beauty 2 my beat!!!!!(while everybody's beating love!!!!)

europe needs a british-irish boy band. Simon Cowell, of the x factor, selected these five special guys to become that band that will take this to the next level
Zayn, from bradford, codename Dj malik
From Cheshire, Harry codename Hazza
From Wolverhampton, Liam codename Daddy Directioner
From Doncaster, Louis codename Boobear
and from Mullingar, Niall codename Nialler
when these five guys formed together in 2010 they are one direction. One Direction started when there on x-factor, and today they have made history when they sang their hits One Thing and What Makes you beautiful. What does make youself more beautiful? do you?

Lol ok so this is my first critique so what shall i say..

LOUIS: well I love how u made him look well like him! But the hair is a little weird... Sorry, but everything else about him is perfect!

Niall: I like how... Well actually Niall turned out perfect! Everything about him! The hair, the eyes, and well his smile! Ahhhh that smile! I love how u worked hard on him and well all of them!

Harry: well the hair needs to be a little more curlier, other than that perfect!

Liam: well no offense but Liam doesn't look right, his shoulders are a little too high and the hair is a little funky, but I love everything else! The eye color is about just right!

Zayn: WOW zayn's hair is perfect! You got the earrings but u forgot some tattoos, the eye color is just right!

Well all of the shading is great!

Vision: well I can clearly see you made it anime-style

Originality: it's very original, you used your own style and I love when people stick to their style!

Ok so I'm not good at critiques at all but I hope u think it's fair and sorry that it's not a very great critique! It's my first one so yeah.... But your an amazing artist and don't forget that! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

~ninjakittythornfur

I'm going to write a critique but I don't actually know how to really write one, this is my first time doing this. Okay. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>
I'm going to give you a completely honest opinion, no offense intended.

Okay... I'm afraid to say this but Louis, Harry and Liam just almost resemble the people themselves, but good job on the faces though (they're incredible and they have the same expressions/features as them!!)!!

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Louis hair is a little weird, because it's like sticking out a little at the top there, but otherwise he's good!

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Harry's hair (in MY opinion, I don't know about anyone else) should be a little curly(er, if that is a word), and his legs seem a bit skinny.

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For Liam, it's only his hair that's a little weird, as it's not really spiky/straight because even when it's 'straight', you can see it's kinda soft/wavy-ish(?). Other than that, NICE!!

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No comment, because he's perfect. EVERYTHING. The eyes, the hair, that smile... AHHH!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/>

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His hair is a little 'up', so I suggest to tune it down a little. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>
Watched 'The Adventerous Adventures of One Direction' yet? I think someone would make a comment like that. Other than that, Zayn's perfect. YAY! You even included a varsity jacket!!!

So that's all you'll be hearing from me (from this critique, of course I won't CUT ALL THE ROPES OF COMUNICATION WITH YOU) so I hope this was fair! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Hello c: To start off, I must say I am very impressed and this is better than I could do <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>

Vision - It's clear that you wanted to create an anime-style group portrait of One Direction.

Originality - I've seen a lot of portraits similar, although none with a style quite like yours. Instead of the group in a normal standing position, perhaps them in several different poses each could make it stand out more <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Technique - Overall your technique is great, the lighting and shading are perfect. Each subject resembles their real life version, although if you wanted to make them more realistic - Louis' torso could be shortened, while Harry's could be lengthened. Liam's hair is a little too straight and short.

Impact - Again, tying into originality, you do have a different style compared to many different group fan art, but this isn't something that I will keep in my head for a long time.

Oh. My. Gosh. This is really amazing, I'm being completely honest.

The only things I could critique you on are that...

~ Harry seems a bit too skinny in his legs and his hair could be a bit longer

~ Liam's hair is a bit shorter/straighter than it is now

~ The part in Louis' hair could be a little more to the right his hair itself could be a bit wavier maybe? just my opinion.

Compliments(:

~ NIALL LOOKS SO PERFECTLY ALIKE THE REAL ONE!

~ ZAYN LOOKS PERFECT AS WELL!^.^

~ THEIR CLOTHES ARE SPOT ON!

~ I could tell right away who was who. Didn't need to see their names.

~ Overall, amazing job. I could do nowhere near as well as you did. Seriously.

This is really good. your style is very cute, and you did a great job of drawing 1D! <3

Louis, Zayn, Niall and Harry all look like themselves, but Liam doesn't look like himself really.

It's his hair I think- Liam's hair is too short and it's spiky, when Liam's hair isn't spiky.
Also, Liam's right arm looks too thick in comparison to his left.
(I'm sorry to keep saying things about Liam, everyone else is perfect but Liam <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> ) His left shoulder looks a little to sloping, if that makes sense. It looks as though it's sloping downwards.

It's really good, all in all though!
You have alot of talent, and I love the 1D works you do ;D
Your sister has good taste in music, I tell you that! Great job, keep it up. I look forward to seeing more from you, even if it isn't 1D. :3

I love this! Niall, Harry, Zayn and Louis are great in your style and totally look like themselves.

Liam doesn't look much like himself in my opinion though. I think it's because his hair looks spiky here and it's not really spiky.

They are wearing their most common outfits and the back ground is plain so that is why i gave it a 4 and 4.5 for originality and impact.

As always your coloring style looks amazing and your clothes look great. I think you have already improved slightly in drawing Harry and Louis since the Larry Stylinson picture you did. Louis arms don't look quite so big and looks more natural <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> over all I really like this!

Harry's my fave!! You drew them ALL perfectly!!

Wow

Liam se ve genial

Huh,I'm no directioner,but this is actually cute.

I DONZ want to be critical, but isn't their heads too small compared to their bodies?!?