Since few people seemed to notice a big change I made to Chapter Six (which I have since reversed), I'm going to announce a possible addition here instead. Hopefully people will notice this time |:/
Anyway, I was thinking of adding some lines to Chapter Seven.
It would be a brief interaction between Colleen and Delphine in the girl's barracks on Mandajar, in which Delphine confides to Colleen about her family troubles. It would basically reveal Delphine's family troubles and physical scars (something only briefly mentioned in Chapter Ten) earlier in the story, and would hopefully develop Colleen's character a bit. It would also explain w