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The Sea

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I am in love with this page.

No matter where I punctuate
or separate
It still rings melodic.

:heart:

There's something to be said of being drawn to the sea.

I won't say it, though.
Image details
Image size
1721x2538px 1.1 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
SGH-T939
Shutter Speed
1/52 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Jun 24, 2010, 10:42:46 AM
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© 2010 - 2021 carriezona
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TheAllegedKat's avatar
Beautifully done found poetry!!!! i love it!!!
Emesmyra's avatar
Hey, I absolutely adore this. I'm making an art journal for my boyfriend, and I would love to use this.. May I?
CastleOfWonders's avatar
I love the fluency of both the words and visuals!
dead-now's avatar
I can dig this. Words well-chosen with fitting format.
You said it all...thanks!
TehAngelsCry's avatar
I love the way you guide the user through this! I was a little confused at first, then I realised you were using the trail of water to guide how we read it!
MyNonsenseSpot's avatar
I love that you called it The Sea,because as I read this, I feel the flow of the wording.
IThrewMyPieForYou's avatar
ejeans7's avatar
Everything about this is incredible. :wow:
julialight's avatar
nice work! the  way   of combination words    is original.
omnibusjeremius's avatar
I've never seen something like this before - very nice!
QueenSheWolf's avatar
Love this <3
Great job!
Gogo-Ipi's avatar
aw dreams, dreams...
Ripplingwaves's avatar
Awesome concept!
Nia-Katomi's avatar
thats so beautiful
Minipokes's avatar
It's been a long time since I've come across poetry like this... I'm glad I found this.
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Nerd-VS-Rage's avatar
Just go with the flow :3 
ZephyrZane's avatar
I really like how the original text is non-fiction but you managed to pull out words to flow so nicely together. You brought poetry to life out of what was meant to be just informative. Great job!
NarutoGirlFan00's avatar
I just... I dont know anymore man, this is just awesome
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