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The Sea

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By carriezona   |   
© 2010 - 2020 carriezona
I am in love with this page.

No matter where I punctuate
or separate
It still rings melodic.


There's something to be said of being drawn to the sea.

I won't say it, though.
Image size
1721x2538px 1.1 MB
Shutter Speed
1/52 second
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Jun 24, 2010, 10:42:46 AM
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SatenkoDmitryProfessional Digital Artist
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TheAllegedKatHobbyist General Artist
Beautifully done found poetry!!!! i love it!!!
Emesmyra's avatar
Hey, I absolutely adore this. I'm making an art journal for my boyfriend, and I would love to use this.. May I?
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Just wow. Fave.
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I love the fluency of both the words and visuals!
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dead-nowHobbyist Writer
I can dig this. Words well-chosen with fitting format.
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You said it all...thanks!
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sooo cool
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TehAngelsCryProfessional Interface Designer
I love the way you guide the user through this! I was a little confused at first, then I realised you were using the trail of water to guide how we read it!
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MyNonsenseSpotHobbyist Photographer
I love that you called it The Sea,because as I read this, I feel the flow of the wording.
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IThrewMyPieForYouHobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing :o
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Everything about this is incredible. :wow:
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julialightProfessional Digital Artist
nice work! the  way   of combination words    is original.
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omnibusjeremiusStudent Writer
I've never seen something like this before - very nice!
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Love this <3
Great job!
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Gogo-IpiHobbyist Photographer
aw dreams, dreams...
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Awesome concept!
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Nia-KatomiStudent Artist
thats so beautiful
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MinipokesHobbyist General Artist
It's been a long time since I've come across poetry like this... I'm glad I found this.
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I don't get it... =/
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Just go with the flow :3 
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ZephyrZaneHobbyist General Artist
I really like how the original text is non-fiction but you managed to pull out words to flow so nicely together. You brought poetry to life out of what was meant to be just informative. Great job!
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I just... I dont know anymore man, this is just awesome
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