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Lee Anne, I think you've done a wonderful job with this so I was hesitant to write a critique, but I do want to try to be helpful! ;) I'd say I agree with Joey about how some of your edges are too clean and the background could be blurred and faded a bit to push it back. I also wonder about the dark areas under the mountains because I can't tell if those are shadows from the clouds or the mountains? It may help if those are defined a little more. And the foreground sand on the ground could use more detail to contrast it with the background sand. Maybe find or create a nice texture brush to add some visible grains. Overall I don't think it needs too much tweaking. It's very nice work!
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LeeAnneKortus Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks so much Carrie!
I do feel the ground needs more texture :nod: I will see what I can do with the shadows under the rocks...I'm wondering a bit about the lighting on the whole scene actually.
Thank you for a great critique! :hug:
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CarrieBest Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome Lee Anne! :hug:
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