This should be a movie! Seriously, I could imagine Guillermo Deltoro directing something like this. You have an entire functioning world built here, it’s awesome.
She’s really in trouble now...from two different angles. Did she know what she was really looking for when she visited Jules? I feel anxious (in a good way) simply thinking about whether even she knows how she feels anymore. And now she’s given Smirella a reason to be unhappy with her. That seems like it could be just as bad.
This was awesome. Seriously, make sure this is copyrighted, I don’t think I’ve read something this original in a long time.