Gone Missing Pg. 2 (Unfinished Comic)

The dialogue here is…fine. It’s passable. I don’t like how I wrote Rosa Lee’s dialogue though. The characters have changed slightly since 2021. Most notably, Nancy is just hanging around as if she isn’t the menace of the town. Weird choices all around. If you pay attention, you’ll notice Hudson listening in and basically stalking Joyce, evaluating her potential as a victim.