Awesome critique Max! And much appreciated! I'll definitely work on some fixes, because you're esepcially right about the Hologram platform! (I kinda forgot to make it look like it was hovering)

It was meant to be upside-down, but I really could've tried a little harder!

Awesome! And thank you! I actually think I should've punched out the line's colours a little more, because the original inks are actually quite tapered... It's the overall darkness of the scene that stuff seems to get lost... And jaaaa, that hilt was pure laziness on my part!

HAHAHAHA! Hey, maybe I was talking about her cooking skills!

Ez, as always, I find your wok inspiring! You get the most sublime expressions in the simplest forms and it screams from every line of your work! Ariel's happy curiosity is sweetly endearing, it just makes you wanna give her a hug!

The one place I can offer a slight crit on is an agreement with one of the comments about the hair, I also think it just needs a little more fluidity and softness in the underwater setting, but that's pretty much the only thing I could find that's just a tiny bit off... Otherwise, I LOVE the colours, especially the ambient highlights and shines, and this is just a sketch!

Fantastic work indeed! (As I've mentioned before!)