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April
pulls its fog-shroud
over the coast, battered
by surf, the seagulls' songs haunting
the tides.

Sea fog
lifts and lightens
over cliffs the color
of despair. Waves reach up to touch
sunlight.

South winds
banish the gray –
the barren, muddy earth
shows the first emerald sparks of life
returned.

Flowers
bloom from swollen
buds, the ocean cliffs turned
into a realm of light and joy;
sea rose.

Robins
return to nest,
gracing the cerulean
sky with the ancient verse of spring
once more.

April
lifts and lightens
the barren, muddy earth
into a realm of light and joy
once more.
I was inspired to try a garland cinquain, and this is the result. I'm quite pleased with how this one came out, so please let me know what you think :)
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hannibus42 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2018  Student Writer
Nice! Really pretty tbh.
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Captain-Random Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2018  Professional Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you think so :D
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hannibus42 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2018  Student Writer
Yw
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