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Mars' Opposition. Chapter 1: Dream

This is a cover page of the first chapter of my new comic, which is mostly about the "Captain Planet" villains' stories, motivations and the possibility of becoming better people for some of them in time.

the first row: Sly Sludge, Verminous Skumm
the second row: Hoggish Greedly, Looten Plunder, Zarm
the third row: Duke Nukem, Dr Blight

The comic:
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Cover Page of the Second Chapter
Cover page of the Third chapter
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JuliaMersmann's avatar

Awww! I loved the idea of doing a table of contents for your comic! Makes it easy to find everything and reading it all from the scratch! I am so looking forward to it! :-) As for the coverimage: I like the details and the way you presented so many characters, giving them all a unique pose and expression. - Of course Plunder is the best!!! :-D

I feel like there could be some more contrasts to make the characters stand out more in front of the background. This is no serious thing and just about my own taste. I hope it's okay for me to give you some (I hope) constructive critisism. To my eyes there is no doubt you are the better comic-artist, so I don't mean to diminish your work here. --- As for me: I always like to get some nice and helpful words, about positive aspects of my pictures and things that the viewer may see a little bit different from me.

Captain-Plunder's avatar

Thank you very much : - ) I am glad that you approve the idea of table of contents : - ) And the cover page was a great opportunity to draw all the team together : - ) I am happy that you like the characters : - )

It is okay : - ) I know about the contrast, my art teacher also keep saying that. I try, really, I just do not have the skill to add it : - ))

JuliaMersmann's avatar

Art teacher? Now I am curious, if this is okay for you: Are you having private lessons? Would be interesting for me to hear about that. --- I have done "anatomical nude painting" for a while which was really helpful, but I never took lessons.

Captain-Plunder's avatar

Yes, I used to take private lessons until my art teacher got a full-time job and then she had no time to give private lessons anymore. Although I show her my new pictures from time to time and she gives advice.

I also had been taking art courses for two years before the pandemic. Those courses were for people of all ages and included lessons in drawing, painting and composition.

JuliaMersmann's avatar

Cool! I envy you you got an art teacher. When I was younger there were no real teachers where I live.... actually I was the one giving lessons for little children when I was just starting doing art... well... for a bunch of tiny kids I guess I wasn't a bad teacher, allthough I had a lot to learn.... .... ... then I was too stubborn to accept a teacher (like: "The hell... I WAS a teacher!!! Why would I pay one!!!!") ... and now I don't really have the money AND there is noone. Lol! :-D

ajosephletizia's avatar

So I am going to start reading this from page 1. The colored cover looks great!

Captain-Plunder's avatar

Thank you for your continuous support! But really, there is no need to read that much : - )

The newest pages, which I post every Monday, are much better than the old ones, and I would appreciate your comments on them : - )

ajosephletizia's avatar

Okay, but the first pages did give me some more context. And I did like the panels. But I will read the newer ones. At any rate....keep up the good work!

Captain-Plunder's avatar

Thank you very much!

I will try my best : - )

Kaywest's avatar
Duuuude, this is a sweet cover bro. Nicely done :clap:
Captain-Plunder's avatar
Thank you very much! I like "Captain Planet" villains, especially my OTP : - )
Kaywest's avatar
You do indeed bro, I look forward to reading the story you made :D
Captain-Plunder's avatar
Thank you very much for your interest, my friend! It means a lot to me!
86DrBlight's avatar
Very nice work again. But I wonder why the guys don't enjoy to look at the sexy and sultry hot pose of Dr. Blight!
Captain-Plunder's avatar
Thank you very much! Well, all the villains are kind of posing for a group photo here 0 : - ) So they look at the camera : - ))
86DrBlight's avatar
I would definetely give a fuck about the camera and watch Dr. Blight's sexy posing instead!
Captain-Plunder's avatar
I am sure you would 0 : - ) It is nice to meet a fellow fan of Dr. Blight 0 : - )
Dr. Blight looking as sexy as ever! What a body, what a sexy face and what blonde hair and what white skin!
Captain-Plunder's avatar
Thank you very much! I am glad that I was able to show her beauty on my picture! I love Dr. Blight too 0 : - )
JericaWinters's avatar
I love all the details in this, especially how each character has a unique pose. Good job on the clothing for everyone (I find this hard myself). Also, nice job with the shading and colours too. Keep up the great work! :la:
Captain-Plunder's avatar
Thank you very much! 0 : - ) I love these team of villains and I tried to show their personalities in their poses : - ) I am glad that you like it 0 : - )
peacheyi's avatar
I'm still planning to sit down and read all of this once I have time. :"D 

Will it be an on going project for a good while? :hug:

Love that detailing here though. The colors are super nice too, they blend so well together! <3
Captain-Plunder's avatar
Oh, thank you! Your attention to my comic really means a lot to me!

I hope the villains' adventures in my AU story will be continuing for a long time : - ) I plan to draw seven chapters, and only the first chapter, which is about all the villains getting together and meeting Zarm, is closing to its final : - )
peacheyi's avatar
You're really welcome! (I've been so busy, so I haven't gotten around to starting to read from page one, but what I have read it seems so fun and interesting to keep up with. I plan to sit down and go through it all soon! <3 I love the art on them too. *o* )

I see! :'D! I think the AU idea with the villain's is such a fun idea too. :'D I remember some of Captain Planet when I was younger. So seeing your work is like a trip down memory lane, it's fun! :'D
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