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Three Apples- Three Pages [MORE IN DESCRIPTION]

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The first three pages of Three Apples, which is up and running at
>www.three-apples.tumblr.com
*www.three-apples.tumblr.com
>www.three-apples.tumblr.com
*www.three-apples.tumblr.com
>www.three-apples.tumblr.com

I don't intend to post any further pages to DeviantArt, so if you'd like to follow the comic you can bookmark it or follow on Tumblr, if you have one.

As of posting, we're six pages in and counting. Updates Tuesday/Thursday/Saturday
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GolliatTaillog's avatar
Can I ask: What happened?

Three Apples Rip 2014?
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CuttleDreamsProfessional Digital Artist
I have been reading Three Apples since I found it, and I have to say, for a practice, you are doing great. Each page makes me laugh out loud, and I am earnestly excited for each update. Good luck with it, and I hope you get what you want out of it! :)
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DonZatchHobbyist Digital Artist
I'm liking how this is coming along! I'll definitely be following the tumblr feed. Keep it coming :)
W0nderbolts's avatar
what is that they found? black and white makes it hard to figure out what it is
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CapnPeaStudent
I wish I could do color (the entire main cast is almost exactly the same design but with different colors, so it would be helpful in readability) but unfortunately it's not really a reasonable time investment- I would probably have to release a page a week, or less, rather than three, so the story would slow to less than a crawl.

In this particular case, though, color wouldn't help much because you're not supposed to recognize it and it's explicitly explained a few pages later.

:chemistry:
Z4K474K's avatar
The comic and art style are absolutely wonderful. Definitely check out the tumblr!
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elnachatoHobbyist Traditional Artist
WOAH did you see The Stare Master? In that epsidoe, they wanted to be coal miners. ANyway, can't wait to see the rest fo it. Also, maybe its too late since you already started the comic, but maybe you should consider changing their noses. They all look like ducky from Land Before Time. Sorry about teh typing, I have a bandaid on my fingerHuggle!
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elnachatoHobbyist Traditional Artist
oops I meant Chomper not Ducky siollly me
ChaosDrgon's avatar
Ooookay, you have GOT to take those things off their noses. It's freaking me out and it makes them look like bats or something.
Luckysweep's avatar
Did they make that hole?
TwilySparkle's avatar
Hahaha this is cute and funny... great job! And good artwork too :)
fotland42's avatar
Oh, you just had to go find a mysterious gem-like object, didn't you. Now you have to go talk to Rarity to find out what it is.

I hope you're happy.
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CapnPeaStudent
You guys really want them to go to Rarity
fotland42's avatar
But, no. Not "want." Just "expect." Perhaps "am resigned to."

Nobody wants to see Rarity.
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CapnPeaStudent
Luckily for you they don't go to Rarity
Skankin'
fotland42's avatar
She's the obvious choice. She's the gem expert.
pufle's avatar
ooh, whats next?
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CapnPeaStudent
Pages 7-10, which are already published and available to read, followed by regular updates on Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Saturdays
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SagelyByMoonlightHobbyist Artist
So did anyone else hear the Legend of Zelda item find jingle when Sweetie showed the thing, or was it just me?
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DrWhoFan611Hobbyist Writer
You need to work on the faces.
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CapnPeaStudent
Could you be more specific? I appreciate the criticism but "work on the faces" doesn't quite tell me what the problem is, only that faces are involved
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DrWhoFan611Hobbyist Writer
Oh i'm sorry, I was in a hurry. Now about the faces, the expressions were kinda... eh... no offence but, there kinda ugly. Not meaning to be a troll. I guess i'm just use to the cutter expressions on the other comics. But i still think the expressions need work. But other then that, the comic was funny. I wish i could hear AppleJack sing that song for real :(
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