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Dawni
384 Watchers48K Page Views631 Deviations
Artist // Hobbyist // Varied
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thoughtART: Participated in April Fools' Day 2014
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I've seen it: It's Coming -- Stay Tuned!
King Llama: Llamas are awesome! (2678)
Double Delicious Cake: But only half the calories! (2)Double Delicious Cake: But only half the calories! (2)Double Delicious Cake: But only half the calories! (2)Double Delicious Cake: But only half the calories! (2)Double Delicious Cake: But only half the calories! (2)
My Bio

I've written this several times, apparently writing about myself is difficult. I caved and asked my partner to help.

30s -- female -- Aussie (Caboolture, Queensland) -- single -- diagnosed with mental illness -- mother to 2 butterfly children (angel babies), a furbaby (woof variety), and a finbaby (angel variety) -- weird/unique -- cheerful -- loving -- cheeky -- friendly.

I believe in a llama for a llama, but I don't watch people simply because they're watching me & I don't do fav-for-fav trades. Please don't feel obliged to fav my work or watch me just because I gave you a random llama/fav/comment/whatnot. Fav or watch me because you like my work by all means, though!

PS, a million, billion thank-yous to the wonderful SilverInkblot who made the pretty boxes for me.


Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
The Whitlams, Manic Street Preachers
Favourite Writers
Terry Pratchett
Other Interests
photography, writing, animals, children

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Comments

Aw. Thank you! That's one of the most meaningful things someone has ever said to me. :heart:
Thank you very kindly for the critique :)

I had another read through and removed one or two contractions that were a little distracting, but for the most part, I think contractions make for a more readable experience. Similarly, I had a look at the grammar suggestions you made, and feel that the current reading is more fluid.

Anyway, thank you for your time in composing this critique, and I'm glad I did the subject justice!