Love, My LoveLove, My Love, how I adore thee,
I love it and it really describes the scene very well and how they are feeling in the poem and how he felt . Its very touching in way that its hard to describe it . Keep up the good work and maybe do more poems and put them into a book . I have been doing that myself . Where do u get inspire from or by to write? I just wish every could feel that in the poem . good work and way to go!!
just be proud of yourself and keep at it.. I know you will do Great and love it.