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i still believe that i cannot be saved by CactusisinaBox i still believe that i cannot be saved by CactusisinaBox
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Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved
Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage
Now I'm naked, nothing but an animal
But can you fake it, for just one more show?
And what do you want?
I want to change
And what have you got, when you feel the same?

BULLET WITH BUTTERFLY WINGS - SMASHING PUMPKINS


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ABOUT THE ART.

First piece of art in forever that I have really gotten into and put serious effort into. Made for a contest on Ponybox.com, it was supposed to be sort of a contrast of elements, hence the fire on the horse still going strong through the rain. And she also wanted something not really gory, but along the lines of that. I also think this might be the first time I've really stuck to my idea for a piece no matter what. 
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Well for starters I just like to point out, I mark fairly hard so bear with the stars because I think this is a lovely piece.
Okay first off vision I gave you 3 I honestly like this, although this image could be a bit bigger to show more detail but thats not a major issue, and may just be me! I love the lighting here although, this could use more of a shadow underneath as you see everywhere else on this image the lights are followed by dark shadows and I feel as though he needs a stronger one. Another thing is the rain, it should be followed through the whole image and not just the back so more into the foreground and not stop just at the horse.
For originality I gave you 4 1/2 because this is lovely work the face, and how it's fire/water, I have not yet seen a piece like this and find it most interesting, or more yet intriguing. Overall I really like the idea or inspiration would you, for this piece.
For technique I gave you 3 1/2 because it's nice just maybe a little more time could have been spent on the tail and mane the back tail looks a bit stiff and could have used a little bit more of loose wet strands crazy in more places because he's running, the mane is fine and looks lovely for this work.
Overall impact is 3 1/2 I really love the work and idea put into this piece and cant wait to see more work from you!<3
This may be a weird critique from someone you do not yet know haha.
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HVMK Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Lovely work! Thank You for using my stock :)
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CactusisinaBox Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! And thank you for providing it! :)
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bellequine Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, this is amazing!
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CactusisinaBox Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! :meow:
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