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don't just stand there
make yourself useful
make yourself obedient
make yourself worthy of praise
get some better shoes
and step into my fire
Inspired by >>> THE THREE MUSKETEERS II

Wow, a DD! Thank you DA community for the recommendation!!! :happybounce: 
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Given 2015-03-20
The final couplet of Thought Sketch 5 by ddlagarry creeps up and strikes with startling impact. ( Suggested by CameronKobe and Featured by inknalcohol )
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tamaraR Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016   Digital Artist
Congrats on the DD! I especially like the the end
'get some better shoes
and step into my fire' 
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! That was the stinger that got people's attention,  and is a technique I try to use often in my writing.  I used it in this piece also >> Crime Scene and of course, Penelope's Purple Potion. :D

Thank you for your comment!
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KellyDelRosso Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
Congrats :jarkinajar:
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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fairestflower Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Professional
Congratulations on the Daily Deviation. I am very happy for you.
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ikuko :)
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DamonLaGarry Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice... Thanks for the heads-up too, would likely have missed this.
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks... your presence here brings everything up to a new level. Woohooooo! 
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LindArtz Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Clap Clap Clap 
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Love :thumbsup:
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Okitakehyate Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Nice, these are some thoughts I could find myself saying to myself as well. Obedient is the hardest one for me to be.
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
As artists conformity and obedience are foreign concepts.  Never concede. :)
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Okitakehyate Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
:)
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TheSilverBells Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Whoa! This is sharp. Tightly written and commanding. 
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Many thanks! :)
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Lintu47 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :love: by CookiemagiK
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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Lintu47 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure! Cuddling Practice by TheHugClub
Flower dance by blaahy
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CameronKobe Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations! :clap:  Great little piece...one treasure among many in your gallery.  As someone else mentioned, love the ability to interpret this in different ways.  And those last two lines, especially--the impact is really powerful.
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU for the suggestion!! Hug I am enjoying my time here immensely... I find the environment very inspiring :)
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CameronKobe Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Evidently!  Your output is impressive :nod:
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:) (Smile) 
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krasblak Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Professional General Artist
Congratulations on the Daily Deviation!
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!! I'm so honored. Heart 
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krasblak Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Professional General Artist
my pleasure :)
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CaptainMockingjay Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I was not expecting the last line! nice job. 
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I like adding left turns, especially at the end. :)
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I like this because it can be interpreted in many different ways <3
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) that is definitely something I try to shoot for.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
c:
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IronBrony1981 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
That's so~ encouraging!Rabbit hole :) (Smile) :) (Smile) :) (Smile) 
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Isn't it?
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IronBrony1981 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
You're more than welcome anytime!:XD:
I still wish that there's someone who'll make my dream a reality.:hmm:
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Picksellayshun Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015   General Artist
Maybe you gotta look past the dream and see that you are in reality.
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IronBrony1981 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Yes, I can see that.=)
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sHavYpus Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015   General Artist
This is.... I don't know....
Burning hot...! Brilliant!

I feel honored for being a source of inspiration to the outcome of your poetry.
keep on doing your thing. It is really awesome. :clap:

Best regards :heart:
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C1nderellaMan Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :love:
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sHavYpus Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015   General Artist
I love deviantART! 
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