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Shinbashi
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Really beautiful variety of colors and lighting! This is not really a critique, but a suggestion--maybe cropping out just a bit of the right side would help to guide a viewer's focus a bit more. Right now, there seems to be quite a bit going on, but I think taking out some of the right side--until you can no longer see the red sign, perhaps--would help to create some dynamic movement, where the eye of the viewer is naturally drawn from the pedestrian (who would be positioned closer to the edge of the photo) to the bright illuminated sign in the bottom left hand corner (essentially forecasting the path of the subject in the photograph). But overall, very nicely done!
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mecengineer Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2018
excelent
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you! :D
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:iconfinianinwonderland:
FinianInWonderland Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2018  Student Digital Artist
this is nice
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thanks!! :D
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FinianInWonderland Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Student Digital Artist
i wrote that bc i was tired and forgot i have like. a professional art education, but like formally i gotta say the way you have the blues and red contrasting in the same image is really unique sand also beautiful. The fact you have the human subject kind of breaking from the background and approach the foreground was very smart and interesting, as it helps draw the viewer's eye to other places. The way you compose the image to try to give a sense of order an otherwise chaotic landscape was very tastefully done, and overall creates an enticing atmosphere.
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burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you for the in-depth feedback! I quite like the colors in this image as well. I especially like the green lights in the far background among the wires. I wish I could have more of that in the whole image.
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Maria-Itla Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The guy in the middle: I don't know Japanese, but boy do I blend in.
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Haha, I'm pretty sure he is Japanese, lol :D
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InayatShah Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful

We have requested your work for our group, I hope you accept

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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
I have! Thank you! :D
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InayatShah Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Its always a pleasure to feature your work.
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wobblyhands Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
it's rare when photography captures my attention. This is so perfectly set out?? like the background, the lighting, that man just walking in at the right time O.O
Also very high quality, nice and crisp ;>
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D I'm glad you like it!
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TheArcArtist Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Gorgeous shot.  Puts me in the mood for some ramen now.  lol
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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delhedalim Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Student General Artist
This is so beautiful <3
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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:iconlindartz:
LindArtz Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome shot!!! :thumbsup::D!!
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thanks!! :D
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theeighthorcrux Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
woooahh this is amazing!
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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:iconakiestar:
akiestar Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
凄い!I seriously need to go back to Japan and explore all these hidden alleyways in places I've been to before. :XD:
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
You must!! :D
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akiestar Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Hopefully. :D
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doctorchen Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
不关心
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:iconakiestar:
akiestar Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
但是这不是你的照片啊。。。Confused 
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doctorchen Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
你没看懂我的意思
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RevengeofKirby9612 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
ahhh, Japan

yes a wonderful country
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Yes it is! :D
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RadioMusic03 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really good!
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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heyheybuddy Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
Love the cool and warm lights together!
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Glad you like it! :D
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true-soldier Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So many lights and colors.  And excellent composition.
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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KizukiTamura Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018   Photographer
Excellent !
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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Rob-Cavanna Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
Ahhh.. visual information density! Fills me with joy! 
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Glad you like it! :D
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ScottishJay Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi,
Absolutely love this!
Would I be allowed to feature this on my blog, www.DailyHuckleberry.com ?  Link back and credit would be provided! :) (Smile) 
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ScottishJay Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!  This is scheduled for 13th of August - sorry, I know its a while away, I've had quite a lot of responses :) (Smile)
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Yes, please go ahead! Thanks for asking!
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ausen012 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018
Nice photo
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!! :D
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Deadpoolbutt Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist
This photo is just too incredible...Sorry I am lost for words :)
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Well, thank you very much!! :D
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Deadpoolbutt Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Hobbyist
You are very welcome :P
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kvacm Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful, nice lights!
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CodeEarth Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
So many beautiful colours!
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:iconburningmonk:
burningmonk Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2018  Professional Photographer
Thanks!! :D
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