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Noctambulism

By burningmonk
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Shinbashi
Image details
Image size
1500x998px 1.38 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D4
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
28 mm
ISO Speed
1800
Date Taken
Apr 21, 2018, 6:41:20 PM
Sensor Size
10mm
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Really beautiful variety of colors and lighting! This is not really a critique, but a suggestion--maybe cropping out just a bit of the right side would help to guide a viewer's focus a bit more. Right now, there seems to be quite a bit going on, but I think taking out some of the right side--until you can no longer see the red sign, perhaps--would help to create some dynamic movement, where the eye of the viewer is naturally drawn from the pedestrian (who would be positioned closer to the edge of the photo) to the bright illuminated sign in the bottom left hand corner (essentially forecasting the path of the subject in the photograph). But overall, very nicely done!
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Thanks for the critique! I can certainly see how that change in composition would work to draw the eye along the leading line of the pedestrian's path to the left.
You bet :D Hope you found it helpful!
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i wrote that bc i was tired and forgot i have like. a professional art education, but like formally i gotta say the way you have the blues and red contrasting in the same image is really unique sand also beautiful. The fact you have the human subject kind of breaking from the background and approach the foreground was very smart and interesting, as it helps draw the viewer's eye to other places. The way you compose the image to try to give a sense of order an otherwise chaotic landscape was very tastefully done, and overall creates an enticing atmosphere.
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Thank you for the in-depth feedback! I quite like the colors in this image as well. I especially like the green lights in the far background among the wires. I wish I could have more of that in the whole image.
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The guy in the middle: I don't know Japanese, but boy do I blend in.
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Haha, I'm pretty sure he is Japanese, lol :D
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Wonderful

We have requested your work for our group, I hope you accept

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I have! Thank you! :D
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Its always a pleasure to feature your work.
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it's rare when photography captures my attention. This is so perfectly set out?? like the background, the lighting, that man just walking in at the right time O.O
Also very high quality, nice and crisp ;>
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Thank you very much!! :D I'm glad you like it!
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Gorgeous shot.  Puts me in the mood for some ramen now.  lol
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Thank you very much!! :D
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This is so beautiful <3
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Thank you very much!! :D
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Awesome shot!!! :thumbsup::D!!
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woooahh this is amazing!
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Thank you very much!! :D
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