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Smooth Move, Sunbutt...

Comic time, comic time!!
Princess Luna Like a boss Emoticon


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Made entirely in Manga Studio 5

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Do you take art trades or collabs or requests?

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Celestia's mind: what in the-? I thought that was meant to keep her trapped on the moon for 1000 years and not be broken until 1000 years later. *spits coffee in Lauren Faust's face*

Faust's mind: Why do I put up with these two?

wildlife20's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

this is my first critique, so here we go:
vision: i like it! i could not stop laughing, and it's true, why hasn't her thought about this for a thousand of years? anyway, for me sothing feels off, that's why i can't give it five stars, i have to give it four and a half...
originality: i haven't seen anything like this before...
technique: i like that you use the style of the show, but still i has a fresh and original look to it!
impact: what is more to say? i had nightmare moon's reaction from panel 5!
overall: great!
Foxytheboy1's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The comic is very good has good comedy I think I liked, by the drawing style used is much note your sentiment in the brush has good plot and good background

drawing style: 10

Technical: 10

plot: 10

lit: 10

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I would say that is so and will improve, plama a bit more your art, which sits much your feeling when you draw
in the brush shown much what you mean in color

In the visual art is very good I love the color and the picture that is used in your comic

Originality is noticed that it is yours and is your style

In the impact only you would say that I miss you something more in your work is something that I can not tell you but you must discover it but my review is that it is very good only need a few details but I really
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Continues to draw and do it for love and you friend

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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This is a wonderful piece of art! I love it! The drama of having to send Luna to the moon, the reaction on Faust's face when she finds out what Celestia had done, the Majora's Mask reference. The only problem I have with this is that Celestia didn't think about the consequences of putting Luna on the moon without taking away her moon raising power. Of course, that could be where Sunbutt got her vagueness factor on twilight. because that's what her mom did. over all, great comic with plenty of humor. I wish to see more comics like this later on.
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I don't know what to say! When I first read this comic, I couldn't help but laugh/cry at the truth behind it. Very clever of you to use the moon that way! Visually, the art is a little scratchy and hard to see a bit, but It doesn't stop me from reading the comic over again! The Technique was executed perfectly though, the ponies look right out of an episode (besides the black outlines.) This is incredibly funny, lol. Its the kind of comic only a Brony (Or pegasister) would get xD

You've earned yourself a follower! Man, keep up the good work!
Godzilla278's avatar
That’s her mom
battlecruiser006's avatar
Good thing my head's on right:rofl:  
Nautilus18's avatar
‘Luna looks at comic’

Luna:”Damnit, why didn’t I think of that, it would have saved me a from a thousand years of counting moon dust for fun.”
demodoqqo's avatar
Sending her to the moon wasn't exactly the best idea, since she can control the moon and stuff...
TeddyBear101ish's avatar
Also, making the moon clash against the earth would wipe out all life on the side of the planet so... Celestia basically caused the death of Equestria.
I believe it would melt the whole surface of the planet, maybe block the Sun for years with debri clouds, and possibly even create additional satellites...
Hellshooter's avatar
Quick, someone play the song of time!
demodoqqo's avatar
Lol yes The Legends of Zelda can fix this! HURRY SOMEONE GET LINK IN HERE.
3e4tforreal's avatar
Celestia you are as dumb As Fuk XD
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TwinklestarMlp's avatar
The last panel is priceless omg XD
ZeldasBrony's avatar
Is it alright if I animate this?
GlitchyShadow137's avatar
0/10 Didn't draw a creepy face on the Moon so it isn't a Majoras Mask reference.
ZachValkyrie's avatar
Looks like someone's been playing Majora's Mask!
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