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oh my gosh.
well, i must say thank you for the very in-depth critique. i don't usually ask for it, but i'm sure i will benefit greatly from this one particularly.

i must have REALLY misrepresented parts of this drawing... that's a green shirt he is wearing under a blue jacket, there's no tie. the idea of such a plain background was that they hadn't begun to move anything in yet. but the idea about things falling out of the boxes IS a good one... and i'm in art school now, going over perspective and value and technique; all that good stuff.

i'm no professional, clearly.
maybe i should've said in the description though, that this was entirely for fun and for my followers to get a rather tiny sneak peek of the comic. i didn't spend enough time on it for it to be critiqued so thoroughly. i'll think twice before requesting critique unless it's on a piece i've spent a lot of time and effort on. this was a rather quick and messy update to... sate the curious, so to speak.

i completely agree though. i'd much rather get crit instead of praise. i'll definitely take your advice on, well, too much to list. thanks again! c:

omygosh, you have no idea how refreshing it is
to get ACTUAL ADVICE. it's so helpful!

i mean, people give little bits of critique
here and there, but i really love feedback like
this. i'll totally work on what you mentioned.
it's not harsh; i'd rather people be honest about it,
ya know? helps me get better. C:

not sure what you think you'll gain from lying like this... but this drawing was done with ink and pencil, it should be clear that i never edited it digitally and simply scanned it.
it IS obvious however, that in the link you provided, someone has erased my signature and added their own. this was very dishonest of you.

aww this is so sweet!! <3

awww!!! thank YOU, this is wonderful! <3