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DA O Final Farewell p 8 by bukittyan DA O Final Farewell p 8 by bukittyan
**Warning! Spoilers for the Dalish Elf storyline!**

First: Page 1
Previous: Page 7
Next: WIP

Next page! I wanted to experiment more with getting a more frenzied look to Tamlen in panel 5, so I played around a bit with some color and shading. I think I still need to let go of my "it has to be pretty!" aesthetic and really get edgy to do it right, but I think I'm getting there. I also might change the blues a bit.

I also had a bit of trouble getting Tamlen's expressions. It's difficult to make expressions on a face made for only one purpose: creating terror.

This will be the last page for at least a month, so I wanted to make sure I got it out. :)

Dragon Age Origins is EA Games and BioWare
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:iconkryptonknight1961:
KryptonKnight1961 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
Alas, poor Tamlen. I wish... but let's not think about that now. :(

Anyway, whenever you get around to the next few pages, let me know. I look forward to the moving but inevitably tragic conclusion. ;P
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Aw, thanks! Unfortunately it'll probably be a long while until I finish it, but I'm glad you enjoyed it so far!
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KryptonKnight1961 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
Hmm, not bad. I guess I can wait. :)
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B1izzardHawkFA Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
looks like Tamlen was Reaperfied
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bukittyan Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Heh, the taint is really the REAPERS!
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AssassinSasha Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Writer
are you almost done with page 9

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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Heh, um,  no. *hangs head shamefully*

I'm going to try and finish this up, but work has to take precedence and I've been really busy with work lately.
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wanderer1812 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor Tamlen but it's worse for Faylen - what she'll have to do :(

I think it looks great, and I agree sometimes its best just to go for it and draw :) ovethinking can be bad for a drawing - something I'm terrible for lol
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I know. That next page is going to be a doozy. Well, the next five pages actually.

I've been overthinking stuff a lot lately, which I should stop doing. Just go with the flow. :) Thanks!
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wanderer1812 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
..poor poor Faylen :(

yeah its annoying...nothing goes right because your overthinking and then you get more stressed because annoyed because its going wrong :unimpressed:, just find some relaxing music and draw :)
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PhoenixFuryBane Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I really love the red and blue contrast in the fifth panel. It really pops. And Tamlen's grief in panel four is pretty heartbreaking. :(
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. I'm just glad that fourth panel works; I was having trouble with shriek expressions. :)
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Comic-Ninja-Whoot Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No Tamlen! NOT AGAIN! This is why I hate the Dailish origin. But it's still the one I play the most. I'm in love with Tragity as my friend put it. It fuels me to write. And this renewed my determination to finish a two part thing I was doing and to post it. AWAY I GO!
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Oh yea! Go go go! :dance: I'm so happy that I was able to help you write. :)

And yea for more Dalish! :D
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NIELSPETERDEJONG Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
Wow!.... Now that expression on his face is just horrible!

Kinda like how Lyna would have felt is the way she feels as well :C
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you. I'm glad I'm able to capture not just Faylen's but all Dalish reactions. :)
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Burhenn63 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
I'm playing another Dalish now and I've been waiting for this scene to pop up again. Tragic.
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Oh the heartbreak your Dalish is in for. :(
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Corbie Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Writer
:cries: Poor Faylen!
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:cry:
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DeepWoodian Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I haven't commented this comic before but I do have followed it. Shrieks are not the easiest to draw but you have become better in it all the time as well as with letting go off that "it has to be pretty" mentality. :)

What I like most in this one is the headshot of Shriek-Tamlen in 4th panel.
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! :D I have worked hard at my Shrieks and I'm glad it shows. :D
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SoniaCarreras Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sigh! Heartbreaking!

In our Dalish playthrough we didn't have the heart to kill him at first :tears:
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I know. :( Poor Faylen. I think she's in for some serious heartache soon. :(
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Blueberry-me Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011   Digital Artist
Ah D____: Tamlen!
The 5th panel is so angst...
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bukittyan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! I worked hard on that panel. :)
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