Hey there! Very cute and sweet drawing! I really like the scenery and the colors you chose. The lineless clouds is a really nice touch Your cartoony style is very nice. It fits really well in this picture, but I would suggest maybe experimenting with thinner lines! I lot of space is covered up by thicker lines and leaves less a chance for details. Her black expression is very cute but I would add more contrast to her eyes cause they look a little funny. It's clear to me you already understand a lot of elements that goes into drawing! Keep up the good work!
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