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hunger

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there is something about this heart of mine, this heart of me,
                                     this,
                                                                            h .  e a  rt

aches to be touched by something soft, the   s a ti n   of
                                     your fingertips against
                                                                           my lips.

there is something about this heart of mine, this heart of me,
                                     this,
                                                                            h .  e a  rt
aches to be touched aches to be touched aches to be---

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thinking about androids who don't know what it's like to be loved, but want to see what it feels like
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PoetsHand's avatar
The human emotion DOES come through. This is more human than android. That's why it speaks so clearly!
pansydiv's avatar
this is so beautiful and sad and lyrical 
love it, love you, aaaahhhhhHHHHHHHH
miserabel's avatar
Really vivid… and so human to me, even if that wasn't your intention :heart:
brokenfragilethings's avatar
i actually intended it to be human emotion from something that doesnt really feel, so im glad the humanness came through.

Thank you!!
YouInventedMe's avatar
I'm no android, but I can really relate to this.
brokenfragilethings's avatar
i'd like to think we all want, a little bit.
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