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i find some flowers by brhtm i find some flowers by brhtm
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model by meltys [link]
ruins by [link]
sky by [link]
flower by [link]

i'm just beginner..your critique please.. :)
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:iconjodipheonix:
jodipheonix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   General Artist
not bad for a beginner , looks really good :)

critique , I'll be honest and kind as some critiques can be quite nasty ...

the ruins are blended nicely with the sky as far as matching colour etc ..
the girl and the flowers however look slightly off , as if just placed there ..

if you used photoshop to do this image , there is a tool I guess you'd call it
where you can match the colour of something with something else.
and you can adjust it to make it lighter or darker and desaturate to make it blend better

to find this tool- image>adjustments>match colour and a window will pop open with
sliders to adjust whichever layer you're on , in this case you'd want it to be on the layer
of the girl or the flower and tick the neutralize box , and select the layer of the ruins or
sky to match the colour to and adjust the slide bars as needed.

I hope my critique has been helpful to you :)
keep up the good work ,you're doing well :hug:
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brhtm Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Student
weuw, i didn't know about that before, thanks for telling me .. :worship:
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Alan24 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Well ! I didn't know about it either ,, I think I have to thank you both now .... So thank you !! :)
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brhtm Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Student
welcome :D
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   General Artist
you're welcome :)
I hope it helps you to improve on something
that is very fun to do :D

I'm not trying to make a plug here , but ..
if you'd like to look in my gallery for some
of my more recent manipulations , you'll see
what I mean as far as blending techniques ..
if you look at my older and more recent you can
see how I've grown and improved. I'm still no
professional at manipulations , but I'm on the
right path , and you are too :D
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brhtm Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Student
oh, i will .. :)
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jodipheonix Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   General Artist
:D
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Ananasbaum Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it, but i think maybe it would be better without such a big moon. you should better on only one object, here it would be the girl.
the giant moon is jsut distractive and the picture is a little bit overloaded :D

but i still love it. it has a great atmosphere and the colourfull flowers and the girl have a nice effect on the dark grey/blue background :)
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brhtm Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Student
thanks for your suggestion, i'll try to be better next time :worship
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Ananasbaum Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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