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Journal Entry: Fri Dec 18, 2015, 5:28 AM
the air scented like strawberries
and your eyes as wide as cherries

my pulse racing as you saunter
so freely past fields of daisies

into my arms and on my lips
is where i know warmth resides—be
it in your garden or your heart

heat rises without single thought

take me back to summer. :heart:
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Chambaz Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2017
Yeah I like this short, but it's like I just watched porn. Love it.
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2017
Thanks for reading! :)
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Chambaz Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2017
My pleasure
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Burntherabbitout Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
I don't know how to describe how calm and clear minded i feel after i read these
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Soniyamalik Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Student Writer
Beautiful poem 😊
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016
Wow, thank you so much. :)
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WingDiamond Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Spice ... & Everything Nice!  These were the ingredients chosen to create the Perfect Little Girl!  But Professor Utonium Added An Extra Ingredient to the "Concoction" ....
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
:P
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pokkinia Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
This is very inspiring!! I love this.
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
I'm glad to hear it! :hug:
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bigartisteArt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice. I like it!
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
Thank you!
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016   Photographer
So beautiful with such a perfect hint of nostalgia :heart:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
Thank you so much, Ashley! :heart:
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Stewie106 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016
This is a lovely poem!
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
Thank you! :)
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Stewie106 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
time!Any
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MadameMorcov Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016
This is very nice.
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brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
Thank you! :)
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theartestfromhell Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful!
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016
Thank you so much. :hug:
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DominicTheRaccoon Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Certainly a peaceful piece. 
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
Thank you, I'm glad to hear that. :)
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DominicTheRaccoon Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
You're welcome!
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pulbern Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is steeped with nostalgia and yearning. I love that!!
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015
Those were definitely influences here.  Thank you. :heart:
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ScarletWarmth Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015   General Artist
oh my word, This is so sweet poem! Delicious words. :giggle:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015
Thank you!
 strawberry_icon 
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Daghrgenzeen Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :rose:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015
:heart:
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foureyes Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Wink/Razz  your words went right thru me :happybounce:  nicely done !
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RJBG Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015
Brilliant work!
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Thank you kindly. :)
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JustACapharnaum Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015
Come here then :stare:
It's summer..and I hate it :stare:
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
I... would love to, actually.  Is this an invitation? :D
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:iconjustacapharnaum:
JustACapharnaum Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Of course it is <3
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autumnicity Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Student General Artist
The romance infused this piece is absolutely perfect, it's like being reminded of the best memories... :heart:
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:iconbrennennn:
brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Such a wonderful sentiment.  Thank you so much, Leigh. :heart:
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