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Sa-id Chapter 5 - The Old Gang :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 2 1
Remembering my  former Cat by brendeaux Remembering my former Cat :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 21 3 Sa-id Chapter 4 - Dinner at Tertia's by brendeaux
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Sa-id Chapter 2: Recruits
Chapter 2 – Recruits
With motivation, any equus makes a good soldier.  Foxes are best used in other ways. -Aquilius
Aquilius wondered what he was getting into.  This Sa'íd was a common street fighter who had never used a weapon in a fight.  He was an amateur.   His trade skills: read and write plans, work a forge, and craft objects of metal.  Valerian thought it would be amusing to watch him die in the arena at the paws – or hooves – of a real gladiator.  The Consul had laughed at the novelty of it all before signing the order to commute.
Aquilius did not believe in training his soldiers, or his gladiators, to die.  Here lay a challenge like no other.
Iridescent highlights danced in Aquilius' armor as he followed the Lynx.  “I want you moved to my stable today.”
Tail lashing, but otherwise appearing calm, Sa'íd answered him. “Well then, I'll take care of a few loose ends, rent a cart, and move in.  Where, exactly, are your quarters?”
Aqu
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Sa-id Prologue :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 4 9
Sa-id chapter 1 - Sentencing by brendeaux
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Sa-id chapter 1 - Sentencing :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 6 9
Sa-id chapter 3 - Training by brendeaux
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Sa-id chapter 3 - Training :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 5 0
Sa-id chapter 2.2 Teamwork by brendeaux
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Sa-id chapter 2.2 Teamwork :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 0 4
Sa-id chapter 5.3 - The Cave of Wisdom by brendeaux
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Sa-id chapter 5.3 - The Cave of Wisdom :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 0 0
Sa-id chapter 5.2 City of Eagles by brendeaux Sa-id chapter 5.2 City of Eagles :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 9 0
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Sa'id Chapter 5.1 - Eagle Pass
Aquilius stamped his hoof impatiently; Sa'id rolled in a bed of wildflowers.  “Sa'íd, what are you doing?”
“Picking up food.”  Sa'íd's fur was indeed matted with bits of flowers, leaves, sap, and who knew what else from rolling among the flowers for several minutes.
“If I wanted to graze on wildflowers, I would prefer them unsullied.”
Sa'íd jumped up and wrapped his paws around Aquilius' ears, smearing plant matter all over them. “Don't wipe it off.  It'll be worth it.  Hold very still 'til I return.  I'll be right back.”  With that, he dashed into a copse, thrashing about within.  Minutes later, he emerged, followed by a cloud of butterflies.  He stayed just ahead of them until he pounced on Aquilius' back, stood up on his hind paws, spread his arms, and held still.
“Alright, ready to go.  Walk slow and stately; you need the practice if you're going to be a patrician with an estate, after all.”  Aquilius turned his head, thin
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Sa'id Chapter 3.2 - Bear :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 0 3
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Sa'id Chapter 4.2 - Via Marmoria :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 1 3
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Sa'id Chapter 4.1 - Bandits :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 1 0
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Sa'id Chapter 3.4 - Freedom :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 0 3
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Sa'id chapter 2.1 - First Match :iconbrendeaux:brendeaux 0 2

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If you follow the logical title-order in the Featured Folder, you can read the entire story-to-date.

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koshnika Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much for watching my artwork. :D
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Thanks for the watch! ^^
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Thank you very much for the Watch!
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Thanks for the watch mate!
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Thank you for watching.  :) (Smile) 
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Thank you for the watch! 
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joebotzer Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for the DeviantWatch Paul! Pen and Ink by joebotzer   Flight Fight by joebotzer   Heavy Metal 1 by joebotzer   Monsters ripping out of me by joebotzer  
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Hello! Thanks for the watch :D
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