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DU - Mr Happy - Lost and Found 1

By Bracey100
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This is my aborted entry for this July's :icondeviantuniverse: summer crossover. The reasons for this are outlined in my journal for Aug 2014. This story is in two parts.

First part by :iconjavipascual213: :javipascual213.deviantart.com/…
Page 1: bracey100.deviantart.com/art/D…
Page 2: bracey100.deviantart.com/art/D…
Next part by :iconbranded-curse: : branded-curse.deviantart.com/a…
Page 3: bracey100.deviantart.com/art/D…
Page 4: bracey100.deviantart.com/art/D…
Page 5: bracey100.deviantart.com/art/D…
Page 6: bracey100.deviantart.com/art/D…

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:iconbracey100:'s Mr Happy branded-curse.deviantart.com/a…
:iconjavipascual213:'s Ghost branded-curse.deviantart.com/a…
:iconbranded-curse: Firebird branded-curse.deviantart.com/a…
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UncannyX-Factor's avatar
I f*ckin love Mr. Happy, he's the DU's Morph. Best character ever.
Bracey100's avatar
Thanks very much! Yeah Happy picked up a lot of cues from characters like Plastic Man, The Mask, Slapstick and Morph over the years.
Kostmeyer's avatar
Nice page! Ghost is suitably grim, Marcia is all business and Happy breaks the tension. Good stuff :)
Bracey100's avatar
Characterization is key to a good story.
Lordwormm's avatar
This is such a great first piece to click on during a DA visit, the first in a while!  :)
Bracey100's avatar
Why thank you.
N-I-V-E-K's avatar
The first panel is a great way of letting the readers know that Mr. Happy can alter both color, as well as shape, when altering his form! A killer start!:)
Bracey100's avatar
Yeah he could always do that (if anyone who looked at my official handbook page would know) but it seemed like a nice time to illustrate that he's not stuck to just a few colors like Plastic Man.
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Empty-Brooke's avatar
Extra "o" in "know" in that first panel, and that should be "your" not "youre" in the second panel. Otherwise great page.
Also, Ghost and Mr Happy may or may not be developing as a BroTP for me... :happybounce: 
Bracey100's avatar
Thanks, for the typo spots, I'll change that soon. I need an editor lol.
Empty-Brooke's avatar
If you can't find one, I find that reading things aloud before posting it is a good way of catching mistakes. When you read it in your head and are already familiar with what's written then your brain tends to actually skip over mistakes and only skims over the work--filling in what it skims over with what it already knows should be there. Reading the text aloud, however, means that your brain has to switch to primarily focusing on your mouth and the enunciation and understanding of the words; when a mistake comes up, where your brain might have skipped it, your mouth with catch the error. 
Bracey100's avatar
Thats an excellent tip, thanks!
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:iconbracey100: :iconsaysplz: I hope Ghost-senpai notices me!
Bracey100's avatar
LOL yep you are right on point there.
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Ha! Who would have guessed someone with Mr. Happy's set of powers could be jealous of anyone :XD:
Bracey100's avatar
The grass is always greener on the other side. :)
Branded-Curse's avatar
"Die Kirschen in Nachbars Garten" is what we call it :XD:
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