Lapis, while I do prefer dresses, I do like what you did with your look. The midriff doesn't hurt either, it's a touch of sexuality, but not enough for parents to think that you're being too lewd.
Peridot, I know what you're trying to do, but the outer edges of your visor don't look good with your hair. The yellow on yellow look is hard for me to look at. I would suggest making your visor red instead. Red complements green and the combination of red and yellow is used in many fast food logos.
Do you think I'm overthinking this?