Balloon Dance (VERY OLD ART)

I remember hearing that Shantae was 16, which if there's one thing that stirs the DA Terminators, is characters who are under 18. However, if so, this has been retconned by Word of God:

https://i.redd.it/6pbhzxx28ew61.jpg

Fetish artists:

Hippity- hoppity,

You can't make me stoppity.

It's not terrible, but I can see why you have misgivings about this. Looking at spite models from the games, it appears Shantae's torso should be a little shorter so her legs can be longer, and though she has pronounced cheek bones and a jawline, it's more done with an angle rather than big, chubby, Garfield cheeks. As for balloon form Shantae, there are some issues with proportions and perspective. There shouldn't be as much of her right (viewer's left) legging encroaching on her panty line, and the divot her left foot has sunken into is too far up compared to her right. Also, trying to fit such bloated cheeks onto her face had the unfortunate effect of stretching out the lower half of her head, throwing of the balance of her face's original proportions and giving her a chin that could rival Jay Leno.

Still, not terrible, but there are a few things holding it back from being a depiction of an inflated Shantae from looking so good it could have been in one of the games.

Just a quick lok over of your gallery shows you've improved a lot since you first made this. Perhaps a redraw is in order?