Title: The Borrowed Cloak Pt. 2 Author: blustersquall Game: Dragon Age: Inquisition characters/pairing: Commander x Nevena Trevelyan Disclaimer: Dragon Age: Inquisition is the property of Bioware, as is Cullen and any other characters mentioned within this piece. Nevena Trevelyan is my creation, under the Dragon Age: Inquisition player character, Trevelyan.
Thats okay! I hope the language barrier isn't a problem with you and my writing. I will continue to write these two, I really love them, and writing is one of the few things I'm actually good at, so I shan#t be giving that up any time soon! :b
As an avid reader and writer of the so called "erotic romance" genre, I don't get to say this often: THANK YOU! You write beautifully, you managed to make that hunk even sexier and breathtaking than he already is, if that is even possible... you made it sensual without making it cheap, and that is a feat most people fail horribly at when doing erotic fan fiction, and you managed to have me biting my lip all the way through, and I am the kind of person that is not easily impressed. Keep up the good work, keep misbehaving like that . Pretty please? Now I'm going to look for my panties... I think they flew out the window...
[Apologies for such a late response to your amazing comment!] I'm so glad you enjoyed this, I genuinely try really hard to make any smut I write sexy and tasteful, its why I don't use certain words or phrases and spend more time focusing on emotion than the act itself? I guess. And a biting lip reaction is pretty much a reaction I want from anyone who reads smut I write because... I think that's the best kind of reaction. XD I intend to continue misbehaving, don't worry about that! XD I hope you'll read more of what I upload! :3
You writing more fics is apology enough dear, so keep at it! I've read the new one, though I didn't take the time to properly comment on it because I've been running around in a rush as of late and I intend to re-read it decently before commenting. I do think that you have a talent for transmitting feelings to the imaginative mind, right down to the sensation of sweat beads running down your forehead. I'll keep on reading and leaving my critiques as long as they are welcome sweetie.
Hehe, well I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it, that's the idea! As it stands, I don't upload everything I write to deviant art, so much of it is short stories etc so I tend to focus mostly on my tumblr. I have an archieve/directory which I'll link you should you want to read more stuff. ;] blustersquall.tumblr.com/post/…
Thanks so much for the follow-up! Whenever I think that you can’t possibly write something better than the last story, you go ahead and proof me wrong! Very well done I adore your take on Cullen and Inquistion Trevelyan
Oh boy... thats quite a gauntlet to throw down. Depends if you mean smut based or not? I mean... I wrote something recently which involved a mirror and Cullen being... Commander-y so... that might trump it? I may upload it here! Thanks for reading, I am glad you enjoyed it and my take on Cullen and my Inquisitor.
Aw! Glad you've had a read of some of the piece on my tumblr! I do enjoy writing these two post-Game. In game is fun too, but post-Game I just get a bit more freedom and get to have some fun with thier antics! Glad you enjoyed it~ and thank you for commenting!