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Made that one a while ago and stumbled on it while I was searching for some other file. I did some little rework and here it is. I'm not sure about the empty area on the left but everything I've tried didn't look good. The longer I look at it, the more I like it (I'm talking about the empty area).
But I'm open to any ideas, so don't hesitate to leave a comment. :D


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:bulletgreen: model by *faestock [link]
:bulletgreen: cliff by ~mindCollision-stock [link]
:bulletgreen: tree by ~markopolio-stock [link]
:bulletgreen: mountains, sky and flowers by =night-fate-stock [link] [link] [link]
:bulletgreen: moss brushes by *redheadstock [link]


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:iconphilliewig:
Fantastic digital piece! I apologize in advance if I use any incorrect terminology, or comment on some odd things. As a near-Traditionalist-purist, I honestly have no experience at all in the digital field, but I'll do my best to critique this, to the best of my abilities ;D

First off, I really love the imagery here. While I feel guilty for immediately thinking "Cameron's Avatar!" upon seeing this, it's clear that you took your own Romantic, fantastical spin to that striking bit of scenery. Those red flowers on the island are a wonderful touch. They pop from the island, but not in a way that's distracting at all from the rest of the piece.

Similarly, the background is very much well done. It's detailed enough for clarity's sake, but it isn't so overwrought that your intended subject matter would get lost in the mix. Very tastefully done. I'd have to say the same about the model/figure. If anything, I would have to say she's a bit too brightly lit for my taste, but that's my personal aesthetic, so take that as you may.

I think you did an excellent job with the color scheme for the most part. It definitely is a great display of those middle tones, if that makes sense at all. It's very earthy, but it keeps that airyness that would be integral to an image like this. The purples really help with that. I would have to say, however, that it's a bit TOO heavy on those warm colors. I'd have to make a similar comment on the island/tree, in that I feel that the green is a bit TOO vibrant for the rest of the image, if that makes sense. I feel that a duller, more subdued hue would better fit the rest of the image. Again, that is my personal aesthetic, so take that as you will.
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:iconoutof4mmo:
Outof4mmo Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Love the feeling of this picture, that instant were she is off balance and there is no turning back...
Good work :)
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Thank you! :)
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:iconmoscaliovam:
moscaliovam Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
I love the concept of this (I love fleeting islands!).
Even if I mistook it for the idea of escaping from the island (not with it) at first...
I can say that I love the apparently empty area on the left (it's not empty, it's full of space and air and clouds and mountains - just what is needed).
I also dare say that I would tilt the tree a bit to the left and the lower part of the island to the right (to give the island with its tree a bit of the posture of the woman). I also like the line from the woman's feet to the lower part of the island and would cut the left part of the island replacing it with clouds.
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Thanks for your comment. Your ideas sound quite nice, I like the one with the clouds. Maybe I'll do some rework when I have some free time on my hands. :faint:
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TrueTaurean Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
wonderful image
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Thank you!
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:icondietmos:
Dietmos Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
i love it. really great work *-*
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Thank you! :)
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:iconmtmac:
mtmac Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I really like the composition in this one! Well done! ;)
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Thanks!
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:iconelbarien:
elbarien Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so interesting and detailed! You even included tiny flowers under the tree; this is really gorgeous!
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Nice to read that someone noticed the details. :) Thank you!
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:icondesignbykatt:
DesignbyKatt Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
:iconmyheartplz: nice work
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thanks! :hug:
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:icondesignbykatt:
DesignbyKatt Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
my pleasure!
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:iconfinkerpopplings:
finkerpopplings Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love the colors in this!
it looks very peaceful and stimulating at the same time..! great job..!!!
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thank you very much. :)
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:iconlilyas:
Lilyas Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
Amazing work. I really like it.
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Happy you do. :)
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:icontravellingthec0sm0s:
TRAVELLINGTHEC0SM0S Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great peice!
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thanks!
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:icontravellingthec0sm0s:
TRAVELLINGTHEC0SM0S Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem:)
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:iconz-2012:
z-2012 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Very powerful...^^
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thank you!
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:iconz-2012:
z-2012 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no problem
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:iconorionali:
Orionali Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The rendition is truly amazing. The contrast between the floating isle and the clouds is remarkable.
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thank you very much, happy you like it. :)
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:iconemutz:
emutz Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
:heart:
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
:hug:
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:iconissa-art:
issa-art Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Stunning and wonderful work! :wow:
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconissa-art:
issa-art Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome :aww:
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:iconursaodyssey:
UrsaOdyssey Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful~ <3
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thanks!
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:iconursaodyssey:
UrsaOdyssey Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem :3
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:iconbibiarts:
BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, incredible piece! I especially like the color. Great idea. Just beautiful! :love:
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Happy you like it. :)
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:iconkirtan-3d:
Kirtan-3d Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nice concept! :D
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Thanks. :)
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:iconkirtan-3d:
Kirtan-3d Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Welcome! :)
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:iconvulisha:
Vulisha Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wooow like the idea like the work like everything :D
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Happy you do!
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:iconshimimaro:
Shimimaro Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool :) nice effect!
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Thanks. :)
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:iconsvenler:
Svenler Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
Pretty cool concept and manipulation.
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Thank you!
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:iconburningblair:
BurningBlair Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist
Noo don't jump!

^^
This is beautiful.
Good job!

:love:
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Happy you like it. :heart:
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GeorgeGoodnight Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Mir fehlt da nix auf der linken Seite.
Manchmal ist weniger einfach mehr - so wie in diesem Fall.
Gefällt mir.
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:iconblaumohn:
Blaumohn Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
Freut mich zu hören, vielen Dank!
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